rate_review Reviews

I know I probably already reviewed this but it's been a while since I've read this and probably been a while since you wrote it..but thought I'd review anyway..I loved this one shot..it was cute, clever, sexy, and funny all in one..I loved how you wrote this..and was wishing that this is how it happened on the show..I liked ur version A LOT better :D *sighs* too bad but it was fun imagining that's how it happened..amazing job!

This was one hell of a one shot.hehe..this is exactly how it should have went exactly! That would have been sooo much better *sigh* oh well..I love your stories...your stories are soo very awesome and this one was no different..You are an amazing writer :)

Ah, that was a fun read: a great one-shot. That scene with Goku and Vegeta struggling and crawling back to the bathhouse exhausted *me*, and I loved their aggressive tussling in the tub before they decided to let it become truly erotic. I had to laugh at the part where Vegeta was glaring at Goku as he kissed him. Congrats on being honored with Best Lemon in the contest!

Poor Saiyans...there's just no privacy at all when your friends can sense your ki all the time :-P I wonder when they had time to "go beyond" since they seemed quite distracted in the Time chamber ;-) Anyway, I like how it fits so well with the scenes and dialogue in the anime. Well, I guess that was the whole point. But I love stories like that because it validates my firm belief as to what is going on behind the scenes (hot slash sex, obviously).

PS, I love how the rating is "not work safe"! So I'm not the only one who can't refrain from a little lunchtime yaoi?? *Whew* That is strangely reassuring.

I've read this a million times and I never get tired of it! The story itself is unique and quite tasty. XP. I love the interactions between Vegeta and Goku before and after the 'act'. It was all completely in character and flowed nicely.

This is definately one of my favorite fan fics EVER!

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The ending was just beautiful. I loved this story; it was well-written and definitely worthy of appraisal. Good job!

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Please continue this story. Its really good. I think it should be more than just a one shot.