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for A Debt Fulfilled

by shadowgohan

person dragon96
schedule March 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM

That was definately a really hot chapter! ;) Thanks for the awesome read!

My vote is for 8. Fantasies...Gohan/Videl/& with the additional character being Piccolo.
person Crimsonskydeath
schedule February 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
The 3 that I'd like in order are Bath Time, Family Time, and Persuasion.
schedule December 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Really liked this one. It was a threesome I had thought about a little, but not too much. You executed it great.

btw, I really think you should do Study Night. We need more Goten in this shit
person TKS24
schedule December 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great Story do 10.We have to tell them… next
person N
schedule November 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great as usual!

Now... I think I'd like to see what you'd come up with 11.What once was lost, followed by 10.What we see and a bit of camping fun wouldn't hurt.

Mind me, I think anything that you come up with is great... but I think you do particularly well with Gh/Vi.
person losen
schedule October 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
luved it! i think you should do an orgey with all the saiyans and girls in the same room also like make it a ritual or somthing for sayins to deflower their daughters before they are allowed with anyone else.... i just thought with your skill of writing i think you could do it and no one else has....
schedule October 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Family Tradition looks the best to me but Dance Lesson, Fantasies and Just Us Girls look great too
person Zephyrous
schedule September 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
nice ending to the trilogy, though it wouldnt have bin my first choice. Then again i didn't vote so ive got no one to blame but myself. Stories id like to see soon would be Bath time, Party Night, We have to tell them, see me after class, family tradition and probably Dance lessons as well. Well hope to see more soon.
person gsfdg
schedule August 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that must be the longest lemon I've ever read, if not ever written! Really enjoyable and good to see the trilogy brought to an end.

Of the prospective stories I think I would most like to read See Me After Class, after that probably What Once Was Lost.
person pettrum
schedule July 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
good story! I vote for 8, or 4.

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