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November 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
What is this I don't even....
it's not bad just.....uhhhhh...wow
it's not bad just.....uhhhhh...wow
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October 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Haha, gotta love happy endings. A few laugh-out-loud moments there as well. Nice :-P
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October 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This could very well be the most fascinating thing I have ever -- ever! -- read. Loved it from start to end, and I hope yu write more. XD
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October 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I have to give you credit. You're a good writer; better than most out there. Your topics are admittedly strange, lol, and I disagree that writing is as easy as your profile indicates you think it to be. But I really enjoyed this. Good characterization on all three. Buu was characteristically depraved and the boys were their adorable trouble-making selves: Trunks mischievous and loud-mouthed, but protective of Goten, and Goten sweet and soft-spoken but protective of Trunks. Really quite lovely. Except for all that fucking. But I have to admit, it has me a bit flushed. Especially liked the part with the 4 cocks, hehe. Nice work ;)