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Hi having followed 'shadow stalker' I noticed that you had changed you summary, mentioning a chapter 13. I can only follow up to chapter 10.
Could you possible tell me what it contained?

Thanksxx

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OMG, Where have you went to I have been so patient trying to wait. I want to know what happens next. This story is awesome and I love how you made your own character. I so want this story to restart. It is a nice difference from what is usually written hope you update soon.

This was great. Please update soon. I can't wait to see the heeroxduoxzane happy smutness.

I'm in love with your writing! Character progression is also very smooth and each chapter continues to keep me intrigued. I can't wait to see how they interact as the story progresses.

Short, yes, but no less wonderful! I am so glad you were able to update! I am still a big fan and I still love the story. The bonding between Zane and Quat was beautiful. Definitely some common ground for a good friendship. And Brenda's last words....Something the boys need to think about. I hope school is going well for you! And yes, I am feeling better! :D You are teh awesomeness!!

And please, do not listen to what that "xkuramaxhieix " has to say. Writing fanfiction is about expressing your creativeness and a universe that is not your own. You have to use your imagination, and if that includes a girl turning into a guy, then so be it. Anime, fanfiction, and every other medium of art is a world all of it's own. Anything can happen. You have so many great reviews on this story. Forget the flamer and think of those of us who love ya!!

Normally I do not read yaoi considering I very much dislike it. But by yours, I was curious.

Unfortunately, you remind me of the idiotic yaoi fangirls that plague a decent anime with its yaoi bullcrap thus I was a bit annoyed whilst reading through your story. Your chapters were good but I just could not get into it. You have a wonderful idea in a story but I found you ruined it completely. But hey, you tried.

Overall, I have to say I'm not impressed with the first chapter. There were typos in it, and you Zandra/Sandra whatever he names is, is more like a 'Bella' character. Bland, boring, stereotypical. It basically sounds like a self insertion fic except girls have to imagine they have a penis, and guys (if they read this) have to imagine they have a temporary vagina.

All in all, I was not impressed and rather disappointed.

EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE! *HAPPY DANCE* You updated you updated! My heart is doing that happy light feeling! wheeeeee! WOW you just made my day. my week actually!
It's ok if it was short! I just really wanted to know what happened next! I'm glad Quatre found him, he's such a sweetie :) awww. Can't wait for whatever happens next!
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I LOVE YOUU! :D and you aren't dead! I was getting worried... no update since like October :o but all is well now!
And I shall experiment with more yaoi stories; if they're well written and have a really good plot like this one, then I'll probably like them too :)