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Life is life and you can't avoid what gets thrown at ya. Hope for the best and I, your faithful reader and reviewer, will wait patiently(wiggles in her chair) for you to update. I haven't been able to check much lately, anyways. Strep throat boggin me down this weekend. Take care!!

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH where's my update!? *has nervous break down*

I really like the story, though I'm surprised I do: since I dislike most OCs. But I must admit you've written yours well. Zane is very funny and somehow you've made him an excellent addition to the G-boys. I like specifically in this chapter how Zane screamed like a girly man and I'm curious to see if the G-boys note any feminine habits and what they'll make of them. I can't believe Zane would be too offend if anyone called him girly since it's very understandable for him. And I can't get the idea out of my head that, should there be a need to impersonate a female in the future, Zane would be perfect even if he might need a corset to give him curves. But maybe he's not physically feminine enough even if he can pull off the behavior perfectly? I can't help but think of him as a pretty boy anyway.

I also surprisingly like the songs you've been adding and I had to listen to the 'like a Boss' on youtube. I think it would have been appropriate to have added 'Jump out a window (Like a boss)' considering what got Zane tied up. It's very funny to think of Zane annoying people with the singing and now you've got me thinking about what song is appropriate for Z's house arrest situation and being surrounded by such good looking pieces of man-flesh. So far I've tentatively settled on Offspring's "When You're in Prison".

I look forward to more.

A massage is something i cannot see Zane consenting to willingly. They have to jump him while he's not paying attention or sleeping!
Zane:OMFG!Rape!?
? : only if you're a good boy~<3

P.S. Dad's stupid dog eat through my chager wire so i can't use my laptop until i order another!

See Ya,
Kori

That was funnier than friggen Hell!! Yes. Hell is funny. >.>' Mmm...Heero and Zane. Heero rubbing Zane down. *faints* I can't wait!!

Wow....Kinky~
*fixes glasses*
Me thinks i just found the yaoi

UPDAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAATE :)

P.S. Oh crap Heero's here! HIDE YOUR GAYS!
-Koritr

WONDERFUL!!!!! Poor Zane's hurt!!! *cries* June's name isn't June? He's related to Quatre?? Zane certainly does have Duo's sense of humor! Great chapter!!!

Lemony goodness!!! Amazing! The plot thickens around Zane. He may not want the help, but he's probably going to get the help. And don't worry about the schooling. We've all been there at one point or another. Anyone gives you grief, you send them my way. *Stands in the background with a big stick* *evil laugh*

GAH! DAMN YOU WOMAN! It's was just getting good! *lets Zane out the closet for doing that*...wait...*rereads* *snort* closet case~lol
Of course "PLEH DEEN I" was over your head but so was a lot of other things in jr.high! But you some how manage to keep up with my ever changing brain waves anyway~<3

If you don't Update soon..I'll hold Ace hostage with my secret weapon! Let me give you a clue..he's not a gundam.

PS: Update soon
Luvs-Kori

I know I left a review when I first read the chapter...Oh well!! I LOVED chapter five!! It was so awesome!! I can't wait for the next chapter!!