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Dark, erotic, sad...I bow to your greatness. This was brilliant.

Dark and Intense! Kept me guessing until the end and I loved the twist but was sad at the end. Nicely done :)

H'okay!
Wow!...holy crap..wow. Oh my god!

I clearly can't make any coherent sentences.
This was really REALLY good and I don't mean good as in "eh its ok", but rather good as in "HOLY MOLY I'M LOST FOR WORDS!".
I am very glad I read this.

What a twist you gave this as well. I wouldn't have ever expected that. I mean...I just didn't you gave enough info to know that there was a man that was beaten...but for it to turn out that it was Vegeta himself that was beaten.. jeez!
*is horrible at reviews* >.> .......So too sum this up, im going to have to read this story many more times. ^^

Great, amazing, wonderful. AWESOME! :D

Very different than what I usually read, but at the same time, very interesting and well written.

The ending was great :D

So wonderfully written~! Vegeta's such a sneaky Saiyan~ I'm a bit saddened that what happened happened (I dont wanna say cuz of spoilers) but all in all it seemed to blend together perfectly...somehow. xD

Hey great story! Well detailed and kept me thinking!

I just wanted to let you know that I've read your story twice, and I have to say that it's both freaky and totally hot all at the same time. I know it probably wouldn't make sense, factoring in the dark theme of your story, but I can't help picturing Vegeta waiting in Other World to kick Goku's ass. Sorta made me smile picturing Vegeta saying, "Kakarrot! how dare you kill me before I could finish!"