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by CeeCee

person YojiKato
schedule November 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
And you lecture me of cliff-hangers?? Heheh. Totally loving and can't wait to read more. ^_^ Keep up the good work!!
person Deb
schedule November 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I have to admit, I'm a sucker for mermen fics and this is shaping up to be both interesting and cute. The friendly banter between Duo and Zechs brings a smile to the face, Quatre and his 'interest' in Trowa is too funny for words and the reactions of Wufei and Heero are also intriguing. I hope you do continue on with this, there re so many possibilities of where it could go and I'll be eagerly waiting to read more and see exactly where you take it.
Cheers!
Shen ^_^
person YojiKato
schedule November 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
And you were upset with me over a cliffhanger!?!?!?! Hehe. The tension is killing me! This chapter was great, of course. I can't wait to see where you take them. Keep up the good work and I can't wait to read more!!
person Sylvia
schedule September 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Cute *^.^* I'm really liking the story and your attempt at humor in chapter 2's title made me giggle XD lol I can actually see Duo acting that way too XD lol...

Great, now I have a sudden urge to draw a merman-Duo (too bad I can't draw worth crap) XD lol Anyway... *huggles* I (im)patiently await the next chappie *^.^*
person Sylvia
schedule September 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
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I drew a chibi Merman!Duo...

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I blame you for it :P lol ((Good kind of blame though *winks*)) *huggles* Hope you continue this story soon! *^.^*
person YojiKato
schedule September 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
'Get that stick out of your vent, Zechs.' Haha. I loved that. Actually, I loved the whole chapter!! Great story, shrouded in mystery that has me wondering is there's something special about Duo?? Well, there's always something special about Duo, but you know what I mean. I may be grabbing at straws here. Anyhoo, loved, loved, in case you couldn't tell. Keep up the good work. ^_^
person YojiKato
schedule September 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ack!! Don't chunk!! *bats lashes* I like it very much. I love mermaid... uh, merman fics. ^_^ Keep up the good work! ^_^
schedule September 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
The writing style is somewhat underdeveloped, but i like the story so far. I think a little more detail would go a long way with the writing. I wouldn't chuck it out just yet if I was you and you shouldn't be discouraged by too few reviews. A lot of people who read them, never review... It sucks but you can't let it stop you. I'll be looking out for updates.
schedule September 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Don't listen to anyone else but your heart. Some people do not realise that writers are not always fluent in every style of pairing, canon or not. I love it. Please continue!!

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