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for He goes running

by Aestas

person jeangreymullinsjr.
schedule March 18, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I am living for this story! Please tell me that you plan to keep this story going till the end. Would love it if you updated. I love how you've made Duo such a realistic character- and he's very funny! I agree that Trowa could be a chameleon in the writing world due to his almost lack of personality in the show, and I think you're developing him splendidly! Again, please update soon! xxx
person Diane
schedule February 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I want to keyboard smash so badly right now. This story is far, far better than I thought it was going to be based on the summary. I love the way you've brought everyone together in such interesting ways that build such exciting dynamics between them. I was incredibly amused by the way Duo's talking to the reader and the odd views inside his head because of that. I really wanted to see everyone go to the club and I wanted to see what Quatre does to Zechs. It should be taken as a good sign that I'm so desperate for more, but I still want to rant and rave.
person Anon
schedule February 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I miss this story! I forgot about how much I liked it until I wandering through aff. If you're still writing in the fandom, please update! Your characterization of Duo is hilarious and I really want Quatre and Trowa to get together.
schedule July 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I really hope this fic isn't dead, because it's just too cute for words! I'm really looking forward to future scenes and interactions with Zechs and Wufei...and Trowa in leater pants. ^_- Grammatically it wasn't too bad of a read so I was happy about that.. (fyi it's chic, not sheik ^_^) I love your character developments and overall the story is a really fun read. Please continue!
person CeeCee
schedule February 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I couldn't remember if I had read chapter nineteen when you uploaded it, because I had to go back after reading twenty to figure out where I left off.

This was great. Nineteen and twenty both. I like that Heero is starting to not only trust Duo, but to really appreciate his warmth and caring. The love scene was spot-on. I always love the mental visual of Duo with his hair down around his lover, with the whole face-tenting thing when they kiss. That always makes me say "awwwwwww..."

I've always been a Quat/Tro fan anyway, but in this they are well-matched. It's not the cliche "I'm going to protect you, Quatre!" vibe from Trowa in this story, or Q being sissy and vulnerable, they're both very no-nonsense and straightforward. And you brought in Wufei. Can I bake you brownies now, or later? :)
person Djargo
schedule February 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
You're absolutely right. V-Day was the perfect day for a litle sap. I love that Duo has decided to take that final step of giving his heart again. He realized that Heero is serious and will definitely take better care of his heart this time around. They were uber sweet together^^.

I hope whatever you have planned for Zechs the skeeze is painfully humiliating or painful and humiliating,which ever strikes your fancy. I hate guys like him. They think they're a gift from heaven and have every right to do what they want.

Glad to see mischevious Duo is still in full swing. This was a unique way to introduce Wufei into the story. I just hope Operation Torture Trowa doesn't blow up in Duo's face. I don't know if even Duo can withstand Trowa and Quatre mad at him. Looking forward to the next update.
schedule February 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hmm, I wonder what they are going to do about Zechs...
schedule December 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Great Story! I just love these stories about Duo and Heero. Hurt/Comfort stories are my all time favorite, and you managed to make Heero the hurt and the comfort!!! Bravo! I also love how you make Q and Trowa not automatically together. It seems like every Heero/Duo fics has them together from the start. It is a nice new perspective. Anyways, I look forward to more updates!
person Nadine21
schedule November 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ok what did Zechs do? I kinda get the feeling that Zechs had something to do with the fact that Heero sounded so stressed on the phone. I actually kinda like Marcus reminds me of how Duo would behave in such situation. Trowa leather, I think it is getting hot in here, maybe you should add another clubing scene. Duo and Heero oh god I wouldn't mind walking in on them, can only say hoooot. Are you going to add the pink stalker bitch of nightmares? About the wait well I check every week at least once to see if you updated and today I was yuhu another chapter. Sorry I am tired and the voice in my head that is dictating this sounds like Garcia you know from Criminal minds and well it is a little distracting ;p
Great chapter, loved the teasing between Trowa and Quatre. Until know I did not mind you writing everything from Duo's pov but well I kinda want to know what the others are thinking like Heero. Well can't have all can we. As I said love the story, the chapter everything. Now looking forward to next chapter and hope you have fun writing!
person CeeCee
schedule November 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
More Zechs soon? Huh? Huh? Huh? *pants and runs around like puppy*

I enjoyed this chapter. Quat posing as an intern made me giggle, and I loved his playing with Trowa, too, it's nice to see them scope each other out. Once again, Duo's inner narrative was a riot.

Thanks for updating this. After the crappy week I've had, this made my day.

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