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October 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I really like the plot of this story. It is not like the standard plots. Is there any way to get notified when you update instead of having to check each day for a new chapter. Thanks
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September 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Finally found the time to read the new chapters! I liked the slave idea especially since I did something similar to the boyfriend of my best friend. Now it is going to be interssting to read how they wake up together, at first I thought hey why not have Heero be in the kitchen/bathroom when Duo wakes up but the I realized that would be pretty nasty. Love the new chapters! Looking forward to the next one and I hope you have fun writing!
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September 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This just gets more delicious all the time. Great story!
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September 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I never got to review this when I first read it, so I went ahead and read chap eighteen again.
hee hee. loved it. as usual.
"Bed time!" That was the best. I can halfway picture double dates or parties that end up with a couple "getting a room" and it made me smile. Other details, obviously, like Heero in a thong or the two of them mauling each other at the front door were naughty and created awesome images in my head. It tickles me that Duo is still holding on to that last shred of self-control, even when they get naked, he still seems afraid and vulnerable, but wow. He wants Heero. Boy, does he want Heero. And it's great that he feels the same way about Duo now without playing head games, like his previous "Don't take your eyes off me" trick that led to Duo getting a broken heart. You can tell he's into Duo now and ready to stop playing around.
The nookie was good. Now you can bring back Trowa and Quat. Or throw more nookie at us. I'm not picky. :)
hee hee. loved it. as usual.
"Bed time!" That was the best. I can halfway picture double dates or parties that end up with a couple "getting a room" and it made me smile. Other details, obviously, like Heero in a thong or the two of them mauling each other at the front door were naughty and created awesome images in my head. It tickles me that Duo is still holding on to that last shred of self-control, even when they get naked, he still seems afraid and vulnerable, but wow. He wants Heero. Boy, does he want Heero. And it's great that he feels the same way about Duo now without playing head games, like his previous "Don't take your eyes off me" trick that led to Duo getting a broken heart. You can tell he's into Duo now and ready to stop playing around.
The nookie was good. Now you can bring back Trowa and Quat. Or throw more nookie at us. I'm not picky. :)
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August 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter! Cabana boy Heero? Wow. No one can defend you like true friends. I'm glad they saw fit to make Heero work for any info they gave him about Duo because of how he hurt him. Also, I like that,like good friends,they didn't let Duo off the hook too easy after he pushed them away. As no one can defend you like true friends also no one can make you squirm harder when making you face yourself.
Movie night/dual make-out session was a wonderful sucess. You know it's good when you don't remember any of the movie^_^. Duo and Heero were extra hot but I understand Duo not taking it further. It's scary as hell completely putting yourself out there after being hurt.
Looking forward to seeing what Duo and the girls cook up for Quatre and Trowa. Between his mischievousness and their cunning Trowa and Quatre don't stand a chance. Their dance night is going to be quite the event.
Movie night/dual make-out session was a wonderful sucess. You know it's good when you don't remember any of the movie^_^. Duo and Heero were extra hot but I understand Duo not taking it further. It's scary as hell completely putting yourself out there after being hurt.
Looking forward to seeing what Duo and the girls cook up for Quatre and Trowa. Between his mischievousness and their cunning Trowa and Quatre don't stand a chance. Their dance night is going to be quite the event.
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August 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I LOVED that last chapter, had me giggling out loud! XD I look forward to reading more.
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August 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I read through this story in one go. As much as I wanted to review in between the chapters, I just couldn't stop reading.
And now here I am, after addicting 17 chapters and wanting to write a review of epic proportions, just to find myself utterly failing at finding the right words.
Your great writingstyle, witty humor and plot makes it enjoyable to read this funny, yet slightly love-angst-y story.
I just adore your Duo. I adore your Heero. I adore your Trowa and just want to cuddle your sweet, slightly sarcasm influenced, Quatre. I even adore your Noin/Hilde coupling. Never thought about those two as a couple. I despise your Milliardo Peacecraft and I hope he seriously gets it's shoved where the sun dun shine. *cough* yeah...
I hope your plotbunny will never die when it comes to this story. You got yourself another fangirl.
(In case of the next chapter... I fear for Duo's balls when Hilde gets them in her clutches..hehhehheh.)
And now here I am, after addicting 17 chapters and wanting to write a review of epic proportions, just to find myself utterly failing at finding the right words.
Your great writingstyle, witty humor and plot makes it enjoyable to read this funny, yet slightly love-angst-y story.
I just adore your Duo. I adore your Heero. I adore your Trowa and just want to cuddle your sweet, slightly sarcasm influenced, Quatre. I even adore your Noin/Hilde coupling. Never thought about those two as a couple. I despise your Milliardo Peacecraft and I hope he seriously gets it's shoved where the sun dun shine. *cough* yeah...
I hope your plotbunny will never die when it comes to this story. You got yourself another fangirl.
(In case of the next chapter... I fear for Duo's balls when Hilde gets them in her clutches..hehhehheh.)
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August 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This was a fun chapter. I missed mischevious Duo. No one has funnier inner dialouge than him^^. I see Trowa and Quatre overestimated their ability to resist and underestimated Duo's ability to create situations to get his way. All he had to do was rub those two wires together and watch the sparks fly.
I totally see Trowa still trying to play it cool but once cutie pie Quatre is in the club,with men asking him to dance he won't be able to control his jealousy.
You rock so hard right now. That you were able to to write Duo simultaneously in different stories with two entirely different voices is awesome. Glad to see your inner mischief maker come out to play. Looking forward to your next romp.
I totally see Trowa still trying to play it cool but once cutie pie Quatre is in the club,with men asking him to dance he won't be able to control his jealousy.
You rock so hard right now. That you were able to to write Duo simultaneously in different stories with two entirely different voices is awesome. Glad to see your inner mischief maker come out to play. Looking forward to your next romp.
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August 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
LOVE THIS! Love evil Duo! Wahahahaha!
Trowa and Quat ending up flush against each other in sexy awkwardness was made of win. Duo worried about his balls falling off was HYSTERICAL. I love his mental dialogue. I've missed this fic.
What's more, you are the awesomeness for being able to switch between two stories that run the extreme in opposite directions. Trinity is so brooding and suspenseful, even when it's being sexy, and then this is such a funny, heartwarming little romp. Duo's a brat, but he's very loving and warm here. Trowa's growing on me.
Is it awful of me that I want Zechs to make another appearance and stir things up?
Wait. Nah. I want more nookie from Duo and Heero first.
Trowa and Quat ending up flush against each other in sexy awkwardness was made of win. Duo worried about his balls falling off was HYSTERICAL. I love his mental dialogue. I've missed this fic.
What's more, you are the awesomeness for being able to switch between two stories that run the extreme in opposite directions. Trinity is so brooding and suspenseful, even when it's being sexy, and then this is such a funny, heartwarming little romp. Duo's a brat, but he's very loving and warm here. Trowa's growing on me.
Is it awful of me that I want Zechs to make another appearance and stir things up?
Wait. Nah. I want more nookie from Duo and Heero first.
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August 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Okay...Sorry it has taken so long. I actually never had an account here, I start writing stories but never really finish. Not the point right now...
I felt the urge to finally review though. I have read almost all your fanfics and have loved them all. I have been eagerly awaiting updates for both this story and Trinity and I feel so lucky this week since they both got updated. You have made my favorite officially Trowa, though I like them all so he isn't too far ahead. I'm also amazed at how different this story is compared to your others. First-Person Duo is a lot of fun to read! I hope that you keep writing, and that you still feel the need to update here-on-out.
Onto what I think so far. A little jealously from Trowa or Quatre would be awesome, as I like seeing relationships have struggles and I really love when people fight that they like someone. I personally see someone hitting on Quatre and trying to teach him to dance more-so than Trowa looking for someone. I see a scene in my head where Trowa grabs Duo, urging him to teach him to dance or something like that. XD That's just me though and even if nothing like that happens I will still love to read what does. ^^ Hopefully I will get a story up here sometime. I've been thinking of a Gundam Wing version of Rapunzel/Tangled. It's been playing a lot in the house lately and been invading my head. ^^; Thanks for your great stories so far, can't wait to read more. Hope to get a review of Trinity up soon.
I felt the urge to finally review though. I have read almost all your fanfics and have loved them all. I have been eagerly awaiting updates for both this story and Trinity and I feel so lucky this week since they both got updated. You have made my favorite officially Trowa, though I like them all so he isn't too far ahead. I'm also amazed at how different this story is compared to your others. First-Person Duo is a lot of fun to read! I hope that you keep writing, and that you still feel the need to update here-on-out.
Onto what I think so far. A little jealously from Trowa or Quatre would be awesome, as I like seeing relationships have struggles and I really love when people fight that they like someone. I personally see someone hitting on Quatre and trying to teach him to dance more-so than Trowa looking for someone. I see a scene in my head where Trowa grabs Duo, urging him to teach him to dance or something like that. XD That's just me though and even if nothing like that happens I will still love to read what does. ^^ Hopefully I will get a story up here sometime. I've been thinking of a Gundam Wing version of Rapunzel/Tangled. It's been playing a lot in the house lately and been invading my head. ^^; Thanks for your great stories so far, can't wait to read more. Hope to get a review of Trinity up soon.