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Oh, how I'm loving this! Zechs is truly slimy and Heero, *shakes her head* Heero better have a really good explanation because I'm with Duo on this one! Looking forward to more soon!

oki so i totaly LOVE this story so far besides heero the ass! but lovem anyway. just wonderin when your next update will be since im new to aff and dont know if thres update notifications here.

I am absolutely loving this story. Even your lemons are tasteful. XD You are an excellent writer and I can't wait for an update. Now Im going to start reading some of your other stories.Happy days and Happy writing!
~Lil D~

Don't know if I wnt to kill you or kiss you, kiss you 'cause you updated (yay, dancing and jumping around) killing because you left us this cliffhanger. I think that Duo should just hang up we will see how the idiot Heero will take that, right now I could kill him how dare he call like nothing happend? Please update really soon please with chocolate cake on top,
I am looking forward to the sequel too, have fun writing and don't worry you are doing a teriffic job ;))

Poor Duo:(. That freaking bites! He didn't even get a face-to-face morning after brush-off;Heeroo just left and avoided him the rest of the vacation.
I totally empathize with Duo. It is damn awful being around people in relationships when you feeling that rejected. He did well to deal with being around Hilde and Noin without becoming bitter towards them.

I'm so glad Duo has strength of self. He absolutely refuses to let being burned by Heero make him lose himself. Sometimes you have to get back on the horse that threw you^^.
I enjoyed Quatre's intro into the story. I think you wrote him just right by showing his confidence in business and his shyness/hesitance when dealing with his more personal life. Glad Duo has a new friend in his corner.

Now I'm going to be indignant on Duo's behalf. I think Heero has conjones the size of watermelons to call Duo after that bull**** he pulled and then not calling for a month. I hope Duo's response to Heero's hello is screw you. If not that I at least hope he rips him a new one. I am so looking forward to your next chapter to see how this plays out.

*applause* Bravo! Bravo!

Quat's lunch date with Duo was cool; I love Duo's internal monologue again, it made me nod along in agreement with a lot of what he said. And Duo dealing with Heero's make-love-and-run was masterful; how many of us have dealt with that before??? It TOTALLY feels like that to know you've been used. I hope Heero steps up and makes this right, and if he doesn't, I hope Duo lets him have it.

Thank you!!!!!! Thank you, thank you, thank you for chapter eight! Let me peel you a grape, fan you with palm leaves and prostrate myself at your feet!

I love Duo's uncertainty. I love his straight talk and his demands to know what Heero wants. I hate that Duo was right but it worked. Everything about this works so well. You can see that Heero chafed at having to explain himself and to be caught with his Zechs obsession hanging out.

Duo as bottom with an aggressive Heero...*shiver* I'm still grinning in a daze over here. Wow.

I read this in one sitting;I couldn't stop reading. The story is so totally engaging that I couldn't wait to see what happened next. I can't believe I didn't read this before! A complete and utter oversight on my part that I beg your forgivness for^_^.

Duo's internal dialouge is funny and realistic. You can just see yourself have some of those same in-your-head reactions. I absolutely loved how he called Heero on that bull he tried to pull at the club. Really! Trying to use him to learn how attract another man is so not cool. I appreciate that it wasn't glossed over and Duo didn't fall all over himself in a rush to forgive Heero. That being said ,their bedroom scene was the hotness. An assertive Heero and not-so-sure why he's being submissive Duo made for good lemon.

Hilde's and Noin's get together hit all the right notes. All the uncertainness,awkardness,and shyness that accompanies a first time was there plus their reactions to each other. It made for a rather sweet scene :) .

Even though you find it slighty frustrating that you can't write a story without adding character quirks and a deeper story line know that it is appreciated by your readers. The fact that you add depth to your story and characters and try to deliver not just on a physical level but also an emotional one is what keeps us coming back. Keep up the great writing. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Love all of your storys this is great I really hope you are going to update soon. I loved how in chapter 6 Heero takes the initiative and trys to explain to Duoeverything. I admit I was a litle disapointet that cahpter 7 was not the promised talk between Heero and Duo but I can't say that I hated it. I don't have anything against the chapter I just wanted to read what happens next between the two guys. Do you have a yahoo group or something that I can join cause like I said love all of your stories. Have fun writing and update soon please both of your storys!!!
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I really wanted to go to a club and dancing and I really really wanted that I could see Heero and Duo dancing while reading this chapter.