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Very beautifully written femslash, for two reasons. One, it was tentative and real, acknowledging the awkwardness and uncertainty of two people who are both new at it. Two, it was insightful, keeping in mind these women started out as close friends. I like how convincing both of them were and their physical, almost spiritual reactions to each other. I like that this was elegant and easy to read. So much femslash can be a hot mess, i.e. sweaty, heavy breathing, unrealistic fanwankery that consists of "we're both hot women! Let's get naked! And let someone film it!" I'll guiltily admit to having written a few of those, until reason kicked in.

I can't wait til the next installment. Good work.

ACK!!! I TOTALLY FLAKED ON YOU!!!! T_T I'm sorry, with all the packing, unpacking, estate sale, repacking, and packing of my own personal stuff, I completely forgot to get back to you. T_T I'm so, so sorry. But, even without my further imput, that was really great. ^_^ I very much enjoyed the scene between Lu and Hilde. I promise, if you need help in the future, I will totally make it my number one priority. It's just that I've got a gazillion things going on right now. I really am sorry. But, like I said, you did great without me. ^_^ Wonderful chapter and can't wait to read more.

Just saw your review reply x.x Anyhoo, if you need some help with the yuri stuff, just email me. I wouldn't mind helping you out and I've got plenty of experience with lessie action. ^_^ If you want some help, my email is lady_malynn@yahoo.com

I really love the story! And truthfully I hope you won't just wrap it up in a few sentences! I for one would really like see how Hee-chan deals with his own issues with Zechsy, 'cause the conversation they had in the bathroom just won't cut it. Also my lil' greedy self just yearns for 1x2 lemon as I'm a true fan of all manly Hee-chan and sensual (not girly, mind you) Duo-bear. ^_~
Hope to read more soon!
Huggles

Suggestions? I have one. A HOT STEAMY LEMON WITH 2X1... Well, that's my preference, either way, I'd love to see more of this fic. I totally love it and can't wait to read more, no matter what you decide on. ^_^ Keep up the great work!! Oh, and I'm totally not opposed to some yuri action. ;p

Lemons! Lemons! Lemons all around! Either couple, both couples, doesn't matter!!!

Great dance scene, by the way. I love Duo's internal monologue.

I giggled pretty hard over the "girl scream thing." That was hysterical and so, so true.

I love club scenes because it reminds me of being college-attending, single and kid-free. Duo's POV is amusing and at times overly dramatic, but his mental narrative is so fun to read. I love the way he pulls the listener into his dilemma, and how you can see how long-suffering he is at the hands of his two best friends, even though he adores them like sisters.

I can't wait til you give us more of this one. I'm still slavering over Prerequisite, but I like that this story is a complete one eighty from it, too. Nice to have a taste of both flavors.

Wow! That is all the initially comes to mind. At first it was amusing, then just hot, now I am getting really drawn in on my happy fluffy side. More soup please!

ugh, I left a review but it didn't post. I hate when that happens. Basically what I said was: LOVE, LOVE!! I hope things work out between Heero and Duo. I don't like poor Duo sad. Looks like it's gettin' to the good part and I can't wait to see what happens. Keep up the good work. ^_^

Yay, me likes. *sighs happily* That was tons of fun and I'm glad there's gonna be another chapter of the club scene. Keep up the good work. ^_^