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They’re in a bind now! Nice to see that Vegeta is so patient with Goku; it shows that he really has changed from the man he once was, and ought to bolster Goku’s faith in him. Sounds like Yamcha is feeling concern, despair, maybe even a little bit of defiance? Though, they are all handling the growing tension well so far. Perfect job for Goku– I so want to see those pictures...

Awww... this is a very sweet chapter. I totally love it. Thank you very much for the good work. I love how you describe Goku's hesitation and Yamcha's dilamma. Now I anxiously wait to see how you are going to lead us.

I really love this story !
Goku is so cute..
I hope you update soon.

I have read the story again, i have to say you have outdone yourself. when I just thought I have read everything everything about this two you creat a whole possibility. this is a brilliant story has many depth. I look forward to see how you going to end this.

Finally an update!! and it is well worth the waiting. So it was Goku's feeling that made himself felt vunerable. Poor him, all these longing and surpressing for years. A pure heart and frustrated love, something he can never expected to return. I felt for him. I love how your peel out the feelings of him step by step. it is very touching. Fancy somebody you can not have in secret is painful and beautiful at the same time.

I love it. I love the resolution. I am so happy they finally get together. I wonder how Vegeta views the turns of the event. He must be so happy and relieved too.

Now the lovers are finally together, how about yamcha?

I look forward to seeing the next chapter soon!

Oooh, spicy! This was a particularly well-done chapter. I loved your descriptions and the explanation of Goku's thoughts, especially at the beginning. And sweet, innocent Goku blushing at just about everything. I have to say, I like the way you're handling Vegeta's character. It's like, even though he's become a nice guy, he still hasn't lost the edge that makes him Vegeta. It's as if you've managed to balance his personality effectively, without losing sight of his actual character. Very nice. Eeeeek, I can't wait to see more!! :D

Aww, Goku's kicking himself for running away. It was interesting to read that he kinda missed the bad boy Vegeta, that he'd fallen for him so long ago, and that he was going to divorce Chichi. Then had to wait because of Bulma and not wanting to hurt her. Typical Goku putting others before his own happiness. It must have been tortue when Yamcha got him instead :(

The conversation in the desert was wonderful, when Goku finally told him, and the awkwardness he felt. Not to mention the undressing and sex afterwards :) Goku must be on cloud nine!

Hoo, that was a long wait! I was about to send you a “how’s the fic going?” note at the Salon. But I’m glad you waited until it was done to your satisfaction, that’s what’s important. Vegeta is running Capsule Corp now? I like it; I love the idea of him as a cunning businessman.^^ Great chapter. Consummation at last! So Goku’s broken heart was not the result of something specific on Vegeta’s part, but a breaking point he reached entirely in his own mind. Very interesting. It’s amazing how the mind can work like that sometimes, and we can build up expectations and suffer defeats all because of our own thoughts, and then other people have no idea why we act the way we do. Beautifully handled, as were Vegeta’s reactions. It’s a relief that they can finally move forward and enjoy each other, physically and otherwise. But now the big question– what about Yamcha??

This is getting good.. very good. :o)

And now I'm obsessed. I haven't read any DBZ yaoi in a while but I had the urge to check it out again. I wasn't disappointed. Look forward to more updates!