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OHHHHHH the TEASING!!!!! what happens next? what happens next? what happens neexxtttttt???? I must know D: !!!!!!!! I must also say that you do a wonderful job of making drama when you want it lol. Keep up the good work ;)

Dangit, I NEED the next chapter! ^o^ Honestly, I'm not even a G/V fan at all, really, but the concept of this was too hard to ignore. This last chapter ended on a super cliffhanger, and...and...I'm sad now. Hahaha, I'd really like to read more of this. I definitely feel bad for Yamucha, even more so than Goku, actually. I'm itching for a threesome, though. Ohohohoho!!! Also, I really enjoy your chapter titles, especially the last two: The Kiss and The Miss. Fantastic.

Ha-ha! Okay, so it’s good to know Yamcha’s not being used to “prime the pump.” XD Lots of wonderful interactions between Yammie and Vegeta in this chapter, and the moments when Vegeta opened up to him, revealing his own insecurity, were touching. I especially liked the comment: “How is it you can get away with fucking him and I can’t even kiss him right?” It’s both funny and poignant. I look forward to seeing how this is all going to end.

Finally the update.Yay! I have read it three times. I like how the tension is built before Goku calles. My heart was almost jump out of my throat when I heard gouk calls. Vegeta did not know what he did to lose Goku's trust so much? He really need to do something drastic to compensate. Otherwise I am a bit worried the third date is just to keep promise. By the sounds of it Goku wanted to do it fast and get it done and over with. Will Vegeta be able to turn the table? I really look forward to see how that is going to happen. Please don't keep ups waiting for too long time time. It's Christmas soon.

However part of me re“Did he really say my name?” Vegeta asked. The way he asked the question almost sounded insecure – like he didn’t believe it.

Yamcha smiled a little. “I told you he did.”

“You also said you saw him.”

He shrugged. He’d gotten a little carried away while they were having sex and embellished. It was just that the image of Goku jerking off was so clear in his mind and he couldn’t help but share it with Vegeta. “So I told a white lie. When it comes to improving sex, lies are allowed.” gret it is going to be over in three chapters. You are a genius you definely should write more.

I am also slightly confuesed this in this part:

What is the white lie? Goku did not call vegeta's name? I thought he did. I did not quite get it.

I can feel vegeta's mood is getting worse and worse. Yamcha is trying hard to make up. I also felt a bit helpless of the situation. I look forward to see how you are going to evolve this.

Have a nice day!
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ahhh, I have sent previous comments without cheching. I deleted a sentence accidentally.

"However part of me re“Did he really say my name?” Vegeta asked. The way he asked the question almost sounded insecure – like he didn’t believe it."

should read

"However part of me regret it is going to be over in three chapters.

I did not quite understand below sentenses.

>“Did he really say my name?” Vegeta asked. The way he asked the question almost sounded insecure – like he didn’t believe it."

I feel so sorry for Vegeta thinking he's missed his chance and also for Yamcha. Even though I think Goku and Vegeta belong together, I can't help feel sad for Yamcha as he obviously wants them both :(

I hope Goku has been doing some soul searching and is not just going through this third and last date to get it out of the way *bites nails nervously*

I foresee...a threesome! I hope. Later. :)

When Goku said he had a message for Vegeta...I was worried that he was going to say something terrible! Though, the way he spoke on the phone makes Goku appear to be the one in charge. Ooo...are we going to see a headstrong controlling Goku in future chapters? Seme Goku!! Possible angst.... :) Looking forward to the upcoming drama!

Kissing booth! Er, kissing contest, but I kept envisioning them in some sort of boothlike setting in front of the camera. That was such a cute idea, something I’d never seen that done before (in DBZ fics). Goku’s gotta be hooked now after such a hot royal kiss. He’s still so stubborn though; why’s he so afraid? I wonder. Yamcha is being very generous to do all he can to get Vegeta and Goku together. From Vegeta’s reactions, it almost seems as if he is allowing Yamcha to prime the pump, so to speak, getting Goku used to a male/male relationship before turning him over to Veg, although maybe Vegeta would have no problem forming a 2 saiyan + 1 human family unit, a mixed race saiyan “pack.”

I'm proud of Vegeta taking it slowly and waiting for Goku to come around. He's come far. Their longing for each other is so painful. Goku is so much in love with him but dreading it at the same time.

Kinda feel sorry for Yamcha, he's being so understanding, when he knows if they get together he won't be able to be with either of them. I'd like to read why Goku keeps going with Yamcha, even though he really wants the prince.

I had not heard of Stomp, but really enjoyed the Youtube clip, thanks :)

This just gets better and better! I love how you're taking your time with Vegeta and Goku. It makes it so much more realistic and believable. I also think you're doing a great job of keeping everyone IC considering that situation. I'm still eager to know what it was Vegeta said/did to effect Goku so greatly. I hope that is revealed at some point. The love triangle that's forming stronger and stronger here creates a unique situation, and I simply can't wait for the next chapter!

ps - Stomp was a great show to feature. Good choice.