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yay! One day overdue but well worth the waiting. I like how you slowly build up to the third kiss. I can feel the tension and anxiety of Kaka. Yamcha is so lucky.
I felt a bit strange that Vegeta is boasting his wealth though. In chinese culture, a man using a woman's money should be shamed of. So even Bulma is dead now, I found it is slightly distaste that Vegeta tried to buy Kaka with his inheritance from Bulma. Also I think his life under frieza meant he is used to simple life style, so I quite not get a extravigant Vegeta. To me both kaka and Vegeta are minimalist. But it is just me. There are thousand images in thousand's people's heart. It is quite interesting to read Vegeta has a touch to our day to day life.

I love stomp. it is a great musical, cheerful and funny, just like Kaka. It would not be a surprise he likes it. I am glad Vegeta chose well.

At beginning I was hoping Yamcha is just a foreplay for Vegeta and Goku, before they have big and fat orgasm. Part of me thinks they belong to each other and part of me felt sorry for Yamcha. However, now the triangle gets messier I am eager to find out how you are going to plan this out. You are doing a great job by not just write a threesome but with good feeling involvement.

Now I would like to say something about my all time love Goku. Goku is relatively difficult to capture comparing to Vegeta. He doesn't have the conflict and angst Vegeta has and his personality is not strongly shown as Vegeta. He is relatively mild and his character is consistent over the show.

However, this doesn't mean he has no bountiful personality. He is a tainted hero. He wanted to be selfish saiyan but has become a kind human in the end. He wanted a life of his own but he could not escape the fate to be the ultimate savior. He has responsibility, hence he made hard decisions. He took the result on the chin. He has his own conflicts. Those conflict can not only affect his own personal life but many others. He can be weak at a point, but he is still a hero. He learns fast and regain control soon. He reflects the ultimate moral ideology of oriental cultural: The way of the god, sharp but not harmful; the way of human, work but not argue. (ÌìÖ®µÀ£¬Àû¶ø²»º¦£¬ÈËÖ®µÀ£¬Îª¶ø²»Õù----ÀÏ×Ó¡£¡¾µÀµÂ¾­¡¿) this is by a famous chinese philosopher.

Anyway, what I was trying to say is goku can appear innocent and childish in a moment but he is nowhere a simpleton. He will find a way to fit himself when he is aware of the situation and take control. However, he is also a very sincere person, who once fell in love, would love without hold back. I guess that is reflected in your story that he is in love with vegeta, so much that to the extent that could break his heart. However, when he realize that he could get nothing out of it, he is fully capable to switch to something else like Yamcha, although not painlessly. However, since he is such a sincere person, I think he might want one to one relationship, rather than multiple relationship. However, I could also see him and Yamcha made good couple without all the anxiety and pain.

I love how you describe his thoughts and please carry on to explore him. I love to see every single thoughts of his.

Whoo! Stomp! Saw that years ago in Chicago.

Awesome chapter. I was actually nervous when Goku and Vegeta kissed at the end. Poor Goku. Doesn't know what he wants. And his fear and hesitation is hurting Vegeta! :( I'm looking forward to the next bit. I'm still curious as to what happened to the two saiyajin all those years ago that caused their previous silence.

Sounds like the date went smoothly: Vegeta was suave but not overbearing, and it seems Goku is still skittish but at least more willing. “Pretentious food bastards,” lol. I suspected it was something like that, though I don’t speak French. Loved the getting-dressed scenes. <3 I hope we’ll get to see Yamcha taking him shopping.

Yay first date. I'm glad it went well for them. Love the restaurant name Vegeta originally wanted to bring him to. Update again soon.

it seems the date went well. i wonder how goku is going to deal with the feeling between yamcha and vegeta. i felt his feeling for vegeta is stronger. but i felt sorry for yamcha too. vegeta's feeling towards goku must run deeper than just feeling towards a good looking saiyan. he was obssessed with him in the anime. i wonder how he felt when he knew yamcha had sex before him--and took goku's viginity, oops. ;-).

look forward to see more.

Poor Goku really thinks this could be some kind of game to break his heart again and laugh at him :( What did Vegeta do to cause all that mistrust?

At least the first date went well, but Vegeta still has a long way to go before Goku trusts him.

all I can say is Vegeta has amazing restraint lol he finally gets Goku on a date, had to sit across from him in what sounds like a cozy resturant, with goku looking as Yamcha would say "fuckable" and the only move he makes is an intimate touch to the face, remarkable. I would love to know what he was really thinking and what he did after he left Goku. I imagine he managed to make it a few miles before he had to pull off to the side of the road and use the lube he has stashed in the glove department for just these kind of emergencies, lol OMG I cant stop smiling. okay back to the review. as you can see from the what I've written so far I would love to hear from vegeta are you planning on doing something from his point of view?

In my last review I made some comments about what happened between Goku and Yamcha seeming to feel a bit rushed I still feel that way but not so much now, I like how you went into further detail about gokus feelings for yamcha and about how what happened between them wasn't all due to the alcohol. but them sleeping together did create something of a conundrum if this ch was anything to go by.

In this ch goku was questioning vegeta about his relationship with Yamcha, he couldn't understand it, he couldn't understand it when yamcha tried to explain which is why you have to be careful here because Goku sleeping with Yamcha and admitting he has feelings for his friend that goes beyond friendship makes things complicated because while hes still trying to understand why Vegeta wants him but is sleeping with yamacha, and why yamcha is sleeping with vegeta when he knows he wants goku, and why is yamcha helping vegeta to get goku when yamcha wants vegeta for himself and might be in love with him. (okay lets take a break here my head is spinning.)the only question he didn't ask is why yamacha slept with him if he still plans on pushing him at vegeta.

but do you understand what i'm trying to say? Goku is unable to comprehend their strange friendship slash relationship when he himself is now on a date with vegeta who he had mixed feelings for after just having sex with yamcha whom he likes.

okay writing all this just made me realize that theirs something I have to know about yamcha and vegeta, yamacha is helping vegeta get goku but get him for what? to fuck, to have a relationship? and did the two of them ever discuss what would happen between them if vegeta and goku ever got together? and oh my I cant wait to see vegetas reaction when he finds out about goku and yamcha

so many questions and now i'm writing all this and you probably know all this after all you're the author and this is your story and you know where the stories going and how its going to get there. I have to remember sometimes that I'm not reading a finished piece of work but a fanfic that's still in process so maybe if I were a little more patient some of my questions would be answered in later chapters I don't know. I just read the ch give my honest opinion and hope not to offend. lol. I do believe you're doing a good job with a story line that is a lot more complicated then it sounds and i can't wait to see where the story goes from here.

I was hoping Yamcha would get some sweet Goku-action. Goku didn’t need much convincing, did he? XD Of course, he’s always been open-minded and always known and trusted Yamcha, so he felt comfortable with him. I look forward to seeing if Vegeta’s reaction will be rage or lust, or even something else entirely.

okay let me start off saying that i love your fic its one of the fics i'm constantly checking for updates, that said, I knew from the preview that this wasn't going to be a simply goku and vegeta fic or even a vegeta and yamcha that you were going to mix it up the lemon scene was good but what led up to it didn't feel genuine. They've been friends for years and i'm assuming roommates for awhile now as well but no sexual tension, yamcha is just now realizing how hot goku is come on wheres his glasses lol anyway he would glady be serious with vegeta if that was what vegeta wanted but hes hung up on goku unwilling to commit to anyone else because that would mean giving up on him and hes kinda figured out that goku might be in love with vegeta. I got that but then things seem to get confusing only because it all happened in a blink of an eye, where talking about a what? 48 hour period.

first there was the plan to help vegeta win goku over and he kissess goku to remind him of how vegetas tastes, so all goku is thinking about is vegeta but yamcha seems to say hummm not bad i've clearly been missing out and then the next day after vegeta makes his first move and he convinces goku to give him a chance it goes from that to a few beers and to a few more and before you know it their kissing and goku is undressing him and their having sex. this is why it seemed fake it all happened so fast, their was no build up no sexual tension like their was when vegeta was simply standing in front of goku. even the scenes with vegeta and yamcha were convincing its just with these two it seemed rushed.

You did such a good job on the back story for goku and vegeta,even in the prelog you say that the one vegeta really wants is goku, he has yamcha play dress up and pretends its him, we read how goku once tasted vegeta and the struggle he went through to bury it, how easliy he lost control when yamcha tricked him and reawakened old feelings and desires, thats a story, thats a build up that will hopefully lead to a satsifying climax just getting drunk and having sex and then waking up the next the morning and its like, oh by the way I like you
it seemed fake as if goku was also using yamcha but more like a shield against what he feels for vegeta. yamacha realizing that he wants vegeta and goku was way more believable.

please dont take this review the wrong way, just being honest and I'am looking forward to the next chapter