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person Zofo
schedule October 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was very hot and certainly Goku enjoyed his first time :) I really liked reading his little observations through out it.

Oh dear, Yamcha's really done it now. What will Vegeta do when he finds out? Does Goku prefer Yamcha to Vegeta now?
person Ulrike
schedule October 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Looks like Yamcha is in a shitload of trouble. I also liked the hangover descriptions. All too real. I do wonder how Vegeta will react to all this...especially if he finds out during some special moment between him and Goku. This story is getting better and better!
person 66Hiei08
schedule October 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I'm watching.. this story.. LOL
schedule October 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ahhh. I felt sorry for Yamcha. I wonder how this would turn out. I am jealous of Bulma an Yamcha, they both kissed Goku.

Now what would Vegeta do? I like how the tangled relationship evolve. you become the master of the triangle relationship. look farward to read more.
schedule October 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Does that mean we are going to see some threesome soon?
schedule October 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OH HO!!! Do I see a yummy 3some coming on ^.^ yummy! Well what ever is coming I cant wait 4 the next update!!!
person Rourinu
schedule October 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Woo! What a tangled web we weave! What a hot little chapter this was! This fic has completely captured my attention and sucked me in, and at the moment, it's the only reason I'm visiting this website. It's been a long, long time since a good yaoi DBZ fic came along, and I couldn't be happier. Hopefully this will inspire more! Keep up the great work!
schedule October 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
do we have to wait for a week to see next chapter? please update soon! whining...
person Kira
schedule October 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well, damn. Didn't see that coming. Can't wait to see how it turns out.
schedule October 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
the second chapter is so promising. I wonder how is vegeta going to make up to goku. a seductive vegeta sounds promising. but i have the same worry as goku as I don't like vegeta use goku's feeling to ”defeat“ him. glad goku has some sense to protect himself. please update soon.

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