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October 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like how Yamcha and Vegeta are friends! Aw. Well..."buddies" is more like it. I've always enjoyed how real your dialogue sounds in your stories. The DBZ characters always speak like, well, real people. I am curious as to what happened between Goku and Vegeta and what got Vegeta so spun up. I can't imagine it was just something dumb Goku said, and I don't believe that Goku would dislike someone so much without a good reason. Looking forward to more!
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October 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Goku sounds so bitter. I really wonder what Vegeta said or did to cause that in him. In this case it would be smarter for Veg to be earnest and open in his wooing of Goku instead of playing Casanova, but I doubt he’ll take that approach. Goku and Yamcha are drinkin’ buddies. ^o^
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October 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Liking this story a lot so far. Those three dates sound like they're going to be very entertaining.
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October 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Vegeta in seductive mode *swoons* How can Goku resist? At least Vegeta has three tries now to win him over.
I'm very curious about what made Goku turn his back on Vegeta, sounds like he got his heart broken. Can't wait to find out :)
I'm very curious about what made Goku turn his back on Vegeta, sounds like he got his heart broken. Can't wait to find out :)
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October 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
amazing first chapter :) I cant wait to read more!
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October 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting. What hateful words did Vegeta say to Goku to shatter his hopes so much? Still, that taste has re-kindled his desires, and it seems he can bearly contain them anymore. Wonder what Yamcha's next move is.
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October 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
very interesting i can't wait for your update
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October 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Nice one!
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October 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ooooo, good start to a good story! I always find love triangles to me so interesting, yet they're so hard to come by anymore. Excellent start, and I hope you update soon!
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October 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm.. I like this very much so far. Can't wait to see what's going to happen next. Keep it up.