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What a coward that Metga was, beating Vegeta with ki-restraints rather than fighting him like a true Saiyan. Sadly his death was quicker than Vegeta's :( Glad that Kakarot turned Super Saiyan because of it.

I was sad to see Vegeta die but as long as he's revived in the sequel then I don't mind.

I will kill you if in the sequel you don't revive Vegeta. I don't care if you kille Goku but VEGETA!!! You know he is my favorite character in the complete series. I just like Goku because is handsome and had a childsill personality, but I'm fan of Vegeta. So if you don't revive him soon I kill you. So prepare your nake for my hands.

In other hand I just want to say that prologue is the chapter that goes before the story begins. The "epilogue" is the chapter that goes after the story ends. Soy fic that. A part of that I like the two last chapters of course. I just want to spect this: When Vegeta revive just revive don't cure hsi bonds. Let Kakaroto take care of him. ^_^ it will fun see them fight during that process.

YOU KILLED HIM!!!!!

HOW COULD YOU KILL HIM???????

*sobs*
You better bring him back to life..... *sniffles* I'll be watching... *glares*

Aw...that was heartless. Kidding. It was worth it. ^^ At least we all have something to look forward to in the sequel. It gives us hope. I don't like it when Vegeta dies in a story though. It makes me cry. :( Even when watching the series and i thought buu killed him for good...i was about to bawl. I can't imagine a world without Vegeta. *cries hysterically* But I still read stories like that anyways. :) Don't ask me why...maybe I'm a masochist? :/ I didn't know that about myself. Anyways, good read, and am now awaiting for the sequel. ^^

Oh that Metga is evil, plotting all these years, and now he has Vegeta in his grasp with no way out! I hope Kakarot can rescue him somehow.

Oh no! Vegeta's in a pickle! I should say a bind. :) But now, it looks like it's up to Kakarot and Gratto. ^^ I kinda had a feeling that something was going on with Metga. That crazy cousin. Now I feel even more pity toward King Vegeta, he's being decieved by the only person he trusts. Poor guy. But can Vegeta escape? Or will Gratto and the future mate save him in time? Sorry, I had to put a little narration in there. ^^

gods you are going to drive me crazy this fic is awesome and im addict to it XD I never read a fic like this, you are my true hero (after Goku and Vegeta of course XD)

o gods this was awesome. I feel sorry for King Vegeta but Prince is right. He cannot judge every third class just for other third class actions. Not every person, saiyan in this case, are the same. I want to know what happen, please update it soon

DUM-DUM-DUM...what happens next? Well, I sure can't wait to find out. King Vegeta's story made me want to cry. I even almost through up. Even though you didn't go into the gory details (thank you sooooo much for that), just thinking about the span of time it took up gave me so much goosebumps. Thank you for the update.

Well King Vegeta did have a right to hate third classes after what happened to him, but he still did mate a third class so he must know they are not all bad.

Glad Vegeta stuck to his guns but I'm now worried about what the king will do :(