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Aw, that's traumatizing! I don't blame King Vegeta for hating third classes, but I also agree with the Prince. Oooo, now his father's all over protective. I really can't blame him. I would be too, if my son were going to mate with the lowest rank of Saiyans. But...Kakarot's a good catch. ;) If only King Vegeta could meet him...Prince Vegeta can prove him wrong. :)

I have to have more...but I guess I will wait for you to write it. lol...That was really intense.

I was hoping you didn't give up on this story. ^^ I was beginning to worry. So what King Vegeta said about his mate was true. I hope these two can make it after what Vegeta just promised. It sounds like this story will end in tragedy.

Still don't understand how one third class hitting him would cause him to hate all third classes. His anger came from nowhere almost as if he was possessed and completely changed his character. Maybe the force of the blow changed him, it's been known to happen.

Glad Bardock knows, I fear they need all the allies they can get, especially now Vegeta is going to start a rebellion.

please, continue this i really love it and i want to know what happens

continue this please!!!! I love it

I'm loving reading these diary entries and can't wait to find out how it all went wrong. They seem to have troubled Vegeta, especially the birth as he's afraid of losing Kakarot, but on the bright side, it's also given him the courage to confront his father. That' going to be some conversation!

Finally got all caught up with this story. Loving it so far. And you've officialy made me want to see DBZ abridged. Update again soon.

I had never heard of DBZ Abridged but now I'm hooked, it's very funny :)

Loved the musings of Tokata in the book, hope we get to read the rest. Vegeta's right, it does sound like they really loved each other at that point, shame something happened to change it :(

Oh my...you saw Dragonball Z abrigded, huh? That's hilarious stuff. Aren't the people dead on or close on the voices? The editing is great too. ^^ My favorite episode is when Nappa and Vegeta are on planet Arlia. ^^ 'Vegeta was a prison b*tch.' I love it. Oh, you should see Yu Yu Hakasho abridged. Even if you're not a fan, it's still hilarious. One of the guys off of DBZ abridged made it, he played Vegeta and Krillin. It's about as funny as DBZ abridged...maybe funnier. Anyways, this was a really good chapter. I'm glad you got a good idea on what to write. Too bad it was short. It's getting really interesting now. Oooo, I wonder...will Gratto get to meet Kakarot? ^^ That'd be interesting. I think there's more to Tokato's death than what was told, but I'll just have to see. I hope you update soon. :)