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Liked that his chapter had some of Kakarot's thoughts in it. He seems very innocent on the subject of mating, blushing like that :) Glad though that after some thought he's denying he feels like that toward Vegeta. That's the first sign that he really does like him and absence makes the heart grow stronger as they say :)

Oh the King is a bit cold isn't he, killing the bearer like that. Sounds like he's never known love :(

Personally I hope Vegeta is the giver, I think he assumes he is and is certainly stronger at this point, but I'll look forward to see what you have in mind.

Kakarot seems awfully keen on meeting Veggan again, does he have the hots for him already or is it more of a friendship thing? Vegeta on the other hand seems to be falling for him, but the class issue is stopping him. Hope he finds a way round it or just gives in to his desires :)

One question. Will you do a chapter on Kakarot's thoughts or is this all from Vegeta's point of view?

Great chapter! I love the bible verses. It gives me hints on what's going to happen in the chapter. Again, love the setting of the world. The more dangerous it is, the more interesting it gets. I can't wait until Vegeta and Kakarot get togther! I never thought Vegeta would get intrigued with him so quickly. It seems that happened with Kakarot too. ^^ Can't wait for another update!

Sounds interesting so far. Hope you post again soon.

Hello again! This story's interesting and really good so far. I like the bible verse, it makes it sound like a sacrifice is going to take place or something. Not that that's bad or anything. I also like the setting of the world. It's all dangerous and dark, it just makes everything more...well, interesting. ^^ Wow, you're making at least three stories now aren't you? Well, good luck with those and don't give up on them, you're doing great!