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Yay! So so happy to have read these last two chapters.  They were great! Progress! I was not expecting Trunks' appearance when he came but, man, I loved it! There's so much detail in each of the chapters, which is good- I like a long read- and I found these last two very amusing. I'm excited for the next updates on this.

This right here, this is crazy! I was shocked to see an update on this story! I had to reread the last 5 chapter to really remember what was going on! I can't believe it!

I have a feeling you have an ending in mind for this and I really hope that you do, and I hope that you DO complete it, even if it's only for your sanity's sake...

That last chapter though, finally, FINALLY some things are starting to come together. This world is so big in comparison to most other stories, and so it can seem to play out more like a reality show rather than a connect-the-dots story line, but I am still interested in finishing it. 

By the way, the formatting on this website has changed, just put words italicized or bold or underlined like normal, no need to use "<i> </i>" anymore.

Oh, and love that you made the eldest Vegeta the bad guy! I didn't see that coming, and that Kakarot came in out of nowhere... Looking forward to more.

TristaML

hey can I be in this story

hey can I be in this story

hey can I be in this story

Where are you?!!! I miss the updates 😭😭😭

 At first, I was looking for a fast and hot story. Yes such a reader you whern’t waiting for. 😉 but after two chapters you had me. I was glued to my iPad for the last 2 weeks. Yes with ordinary life and the fact that English is not my native language (so my excuse if my writing is not quite right), it took me two weeks to read it al. I find it Amazing that you’v put that much effort en years in the story. I hink it's a nice story and it had me in its grip for the last 2 weeks. Though I am very curious about the rest of the story. If that comes at all. If not then that's too bad, but these 65 chapters I enjoyed a lot. Now i’m going to read one of your other story’s. 

Meh. I stopped reading this years ago. Things went off the rail and then you insulted your readers who tried to give constructive criticism. Will be glad when you finish so it stops showing up in the updates page. Bye!

I'm still dying to know what's going to happen. I'm inclined to think that Goten isn't going to die, of course, but the roles that Vegeta and Kakarot play are intriguing me more than anything else at the moment. That, and the fact that a simple solution to the story seems impossible, since there's so much going on, what with their world ending as well as Goten and Ryen's relationship. I will say this website seems abandoned as of late, even I find myself forgetting to check it, but when I do I am happy to see the updates. Looking forward to whatever finale you have planned out for this story.

oh. my. god.

The action levels are amping up!! This chapter was awesome. Lot's of narrative webbing and setting up and I am so excited for more!

I am thoroughly looking forward to the next chapter and the ensuing conversation, and am curious as to weather Reyn will eavesdrop or if Prince Vegeta will bail him up outside the door for something and can't wait to be able to read the whole fic start to finish!

Always appreciating the work you put in and every chatper Chayron!
Thanks, Sophie :D