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November 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OK, I have finally read this all, I haven't worked for a few days to do so. it's brliliant and I can't wait for update. please update soon!
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November 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
this story is just the best I've ever read. I'm just soo sad it's not finished. I can't wait for the next parts. love you!
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November 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This story rocks.
I really love how it's based on the old planet instead of Earth and man.....the military system is kinda cool too.
This needs more reviews because it's a good piece of work and my favorite pairing to boot!
I really love how it's based on the old planet instead of Earth and man.....the military system is kinda cool too.
This needs more reviews because it's a good piece of work and my favorite pairing to boot!
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November 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This story is amazing. It literally sucked up hours of studying and sleeping time so that I could read it all, and now that I'm done I don't know what to do with myself! This is why I normally only read completed stories but this was too good to stop. I love all the OCs, and how they all have their own personalities and flaws and actually seem like real beings instead of cardboard cutouts for the main characters to interact with. Just aaaaaaauuuugh so awesome.
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October 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow. It is getting more and more interesting. Wonder what is that dream about. It seems unfinished. Kakarotto has the ability as well. Why gohan imposter don't want geten to see his father. And finally geten start to miss his lover. Can't wait to see update.
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October 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
LOVE your story. Really can't wait for the next chapter! (you have me checking in AFF on a daily basis just to see an update on Barracks!)
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October 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Damn it Goten!!!! Why couldn't you of just gone along with it?!? :( Seriously, only good thing about the ending was Goten saying he wasn't sure if he had zero boyfriends or two. lol Looking forward to your next update!
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October 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh! It finally came out to bite gotten. The phone number. I wonder how this is going to affect his living on the ship. So another 6 chappie before they meet? I am not in a hurry.
Glad gotten came back intact. But he just got himself more trouble it seems.
Glad gotten came back intact. But he just got himself more trouble it seems.
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October 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm i'm wondering if Reyn is suspicious because of that whole ordeal or if he's jealous that someone gave Goten their number... I'm loving this story so far, it's very interesting compared to others...
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September 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Urghhh... I hate waiting so long ! Its such a great story ! Im starting to get impatient...