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September 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Gosh! What gotten got himself into? I look forward to your update.
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September 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh for the love of GOD please don't kill Reyn...I love him! In that I know he's a fictional character, but still randomly formed an attachment to him anyway.
And I swear I died last chapter when Goten tried to give Mr. Elite a bath I was already giggling when they first mentioned it. Then when it actually happened I literally couldn't breathe, so funny.
can't wait for the next chapter!
And I swear I died last chapter when Goten tried to give Mr. Elite a bath I was already giggling when they first mentioned it. Then when it actually happened I literally couldn't breathe, so funny.
can't wait for the next chapter!
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September 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yaya!! An update. I am glad you made Goten the center of the attention so far. A lot story made trunks the irrestable and goten the one suffer. but goten is so innocent and sweet and devote and lovely funny . I think it is the time for the table turns. *waving her hand to root son family*
it seems it would be a while before goten can meet his love again. Now we just watch how he interact with others and see how the event lead us to.
it seems it would be a while before goten can meet his love again. Now we just watch how he interact with others and see how the event lead us to.
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July 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
HA! Saw the ReynxGoten factor a mile away. As for the concussion, it really seems to be Goten's MO these days, poor fella; he's way too familiar with medical staff. Thanks for updating again, please do so once more when you have the time.
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July 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Reyn is quickly becoming a favorite character of mine. His and Goten's interactions are always so fun to read. :)
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July 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
It took a while for me to catch up reading this, I think it was at chapter 27 or 28 when I took interest, and I love it! However I miss Toharu :( lol
Poor Goten everyone seems to be after his ass. Not that I blame them hehehe.
I have contemplated begging you to use the Dragonballs to bring everyone who died, but I doubt that's where this is going so *SIGH* I'll just have to keep missing Toharu...
Poor Goten everyone seems to be after his ass. Not that I blame them hehehe.
I have contemplated begging you to use the Dragonballs to bring everyone who died, but I doubt that's where this is going so *SIGH* I'll just have to keep missing Toharu...
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July 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yay new chap!! Loved it, just when I think the story might start to get boring you spice it up! Your great at keeping me interested and reading, can't wait for more!!! Thanks!!!
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July 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh Goten, so very, very naive. A private party in someone's room with a porn being shown? How could you have possibly thought that everyone would just sit around and jerk off quietly. It's practically universal that movies=sexytime especially porn. I personally cannot remember any of the movies that I ever went to 'see'on a date XD
- Hilarious as always, great job on the chapter. Goten is just fated to end up the kitchens eh? I'm sure that Kyon's cookbook will come in handy for his new job :3 As for Terran traditions, we sure seem to have a lot of them don't we? Thanks for the wonderful update!
- Hilarious as always, great job on the chapter. Goten is just fated to end up the kitchens eh? I'm sure that Kyon's cookbook will come in handy for his new job :3 As for Terran traditions, we sure seem to have a lot of them don't we? Thanks for the wonderful update!
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June 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
For part 30: XD Cats do seem to instinctivly know the best time to make one uncomfortable hehehe. The section with mr. Elite reminded me
of a series of kitty antics called 'Simon's Cat,' YouTube it if you have the time.
For part 31: I love how how you describe Gotens agonizing self restrictions fro
temptation; somehow you keep him in typical 'self sacrificing Son family behavior,' without making it seem out of place in this AU. Bravo! As for the time bending dreams, I wonder how much strife they'll cause our little protagonist.... ;D Thank you for updating once more, please do so again when you have the time and inspiration to do so.
of a series of kitty antics called 'Simon's Cat,' YouTube it if you have the time.
For part 31: I love how how you describe Gotens agonizing self restrictions fro
temptation; somehow you keep him in typical 'self sacrificing Son family behavior,' without making it seem out of place in this AU. Bravo! As for the time bending dreams, I wonder how much strife they'll cause our little protagonist.... ;D Thank you for updating once more, please do so again when you have the time and inspiration to do so.
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June 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Things are about moving on up, waiting mostly, so no not in life. :-)
I haven't heard the joke in ages, but I know he talked about a friend who mumbled real hard, I should look that up. This chapter was informative, and damn if Trunks doesn't have lasting affects on Goten, its too much! I've never thought about a guy and been moved to touch myself as fast as Goten. Ryen's not as annoying as I thought he was and good fight as always. I have a hard time keeping it to one persons movements but other people don't find it confusing just my proofers. I tell ya, I adored Goten before- favorite dragon ball character- but reading this I like him all the more.
I haven't heard the joke in ages, but I know he talked about a friend who mumbled real hard, I should look that up. This chapter was informative, and damn if Trunks doesn't have lasting affects on Goten, its too much! I've never thought about a guy and been moved to touch myself as fast as Goten. Ryen's not as annoying as I thought he was and good fight as always. I have a hard time keeping it to one persons movements but other people don't find it confusing just my proofers. I tell ya, I adored Goten before- favorite dragon ball character- but reading this I like him all the more.