rate_review Reviews

I couldn't wait to read the new chapter. It's such an interesting story, that when you start reading you just can't stop 'till the end.
And than you get to the sad part of it all...Waiting 'till the next update ;)
But Goten has finally been 'sort of' confronted by Trunks about their feelings.(Not in so many 'straight forward' words, but still, they got the point, haha) I just can't wait 'till they finally give in a little. Untill now they've tried so hard to hold back for such a long time already. They deserve a little break from all the stress/unfairness...don't you think ;) Keep up the amazing updates!

XD What an ending! I feel as though I just bared witness to a key point in an epic romance. Thank you for updating once more.

You are so freakin good with fight scenes, I can see them all so clearly- I should hire you to do mine hahaha. I love this chapter most of all, not just for the fighting but the laying on Trunks' lap smelling him thing, that was a nice touch to the obvious kiss you'd wait for. You own the zone as usual ^_^

Very nice. I like the alternate icejin attack on Vegitsei, much better than the cannon, you're doing an excellent job. Please update once more when you have the chance.

Excellent battle scene! I like the dramatic timing of Kyon and Goten on the precipace of a major relationship development, and the attack from the Icejins. Outstanding job! Please update once more when you have the chance.

Hehe. I loving these games btwn KyonxGotenxthe Shaii/Trunks; keep up the great work ^^

remember me?? =D=D=D
chayron you are killing me with ur writing as usual.

Hi, I just started reading you story and i just couldn't stop.
I read all 22 chaps in one go!
It's really addicting, I love the the plotline 'till now.
I'm a sap by nature so I kind of hope Trunks and Goten are gonna figure something out, but that's for later.

I luv your writing. It's detailed, got feeling in it and it's easy to read because of your good writing :)
So please keep up the good work and inspiration!
Can't wait 'till the next update.

Greetz Neko-Chan.

You blindsided me with this update. I wasn't expecting it until next week. Thank you for putting a smile on my face. However,

What do you mean Goku's gone missing??!

Will your poor reader's never find out the truth??!

And dear God, what an ingenious rabbit you pulled out of the hat with Toharu and Ario. I did not suspect that at all. Though now, thinking back, it made sense why he suddenly became so attached to the Goten. I think, in light of all this new information, this warrants a re-reading of all chapter before your next update.

On the real though, great work! Your beta is also doing a wonderful job.

Please continue.
Your loyal reader[despite the risk of developing hypertension]

WhinnieRich

I really love this story so far it would be great though if you could possably update faster?? I'm sorry its just really good n i like reading it it's just when a ch. comes out every 3 weeks i have 2 reread the ending of the last chapter. (ohhhhh n when do the lemons come in?? i cat wait 4 that even if their both drunk at the time n dot remember a danm thing the next morning LOL im also very curious 2 find out whos ganna be the uke n whos the seme ^.^) I cant wait 2 read the next ch. its really turning out very nice so far ^.^