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Thank you for updating this wonderful story once more and finding the time to do so during the holiday season. Please update once more when you have the chance, great job! I love the visual of Goten scratching his head maddly in confusion, so Goku-esque.

Wow. I'm caught up to chapter 15. All the pranks and surprises were a great laugh. The accident was well placed. I think, that Goten will have to be more forthcoming to the prince about what caused the explosion; suppressing his ki that much wasn't good for him.

As always I love your work. Till next time.

Trunks is such a perve. :-)

more please! this story is quickly becoming one of my favorites! maybe some action too??? just for me :)

Dear lord 2 updates in a span of one week...lol.
Seriously though, I'm absolutely ecstatic after reading these two new installments.
Such intriguing developments in Goten's background! Though,now I have more questions than I do answers.
I seriously can't wait until the entire thing is revealed.
I nearly fell over when the Shaii turned into a peeping Tom. It's now an undeniable truth that he has something for Goten.
The attraction [and comedic frustration] is slowly but surely building. I think Toharu got it right...if the Shaii could,
he would lock that fool up on the base forever.

Your work is as awesome as usual.
Looking forward to next update.
Loyally yours
~WR

Oh Goten, balsy little Goten. Why can't he just keep his mouth shut about certain things? He'd lose something I suppose. But asking for a raise that will crack me up for the rest of the day. Trunks needs to learn how to flirt before he pisses the guy off so much he'd actually knock his head off his shoulders hahaha.
And if it were me who knew it was Goten who salted our water supply he'd of gotten more than an ass whooping. A baren place like that and he's gonna salt the water, boy must have lost his damned mind hahaha.

I was looking at your list of stories and damn all my favorite DBZ fics are there. You are officially my favorite aythor and i absolutly love this fic i am looking forward to see how the relation between Trunks and Goten is going to work.

Excellent job. Did it for the money? I would have done it for the porn XD Thanks so much for yet another hair raising update, please do so again at your convenience.

Wow! It is amazing how things change in a couple of chapters. Been busy with work....

I wonder what will happen to them when the shaii calms down and tells them their punishment. The shaii seems to have a masochistic streak.

Looking forward to your next update.

Oh boy, Trunks is jealous, how lucky is that? It is a shame about Ranvera though, if Goten has to mess around with anyone before Trunks my chips were in dear Kyon's pile. He's so nice, and a good cook, what saiyan wouldn't love that?! That fight scene with Toharu, let me tell you I was waiting for the worst outcome, but Toharu's a good guy after all. Trust worthy, still debating that, but a good guy.

Daram and that snakes name I laughed about, I was thinking the same thing myself a bald snake named fluffy hahaha.