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April 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I really like your characterization of Goten!
The interactions of the people he comes in contact with, really brings out dynamic personalities.
I look forward to your next update. GREAT JOB!
The interactions of the people he comes in contact with, really brings out dynamic personalities.
I look forward to your next update. GREAT JOB!
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February 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
i cant wait to see what happens next. i love truten!
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February 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
LOVE this story. Even though you only update every month and a half or so, I seriously check every single day to see if there's been a new chapter. Please don't abandon this story, I'd be heartbroken.
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February 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
hahaha That was excellent. Poor Goten! He just can't catch a break. Pretty soon they will have him scrubbing the classroom floors with a toothbrush if he doesn't learn to behave himself!
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December 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ooh it gets more interesting. Goten will soon be catching more eyes.
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December 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Interesting... Mind posting the next chapter? I HATE cliffhangers lol
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November 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm really enjoying this story so far. Eagerly awaiting the next chapter!
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November 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ok so I'm like obsessed with this story. I think about it all the time, even when I'm trying to write my own lol. Mostly it's the later chapters, though it is nice to re-read these early chapters as well. I hope I'll get to chat with you online soon so I can tell you everything I adored about 11 and 12. Fantastic, just fantastic.
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November 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Excellent job. I love the FFVII inference with weapon types featured. Please review once more when you find yourself capable of doing so and once you have found an adequate beta.
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November 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*glomps*
Aww, you just made me so happy :) I can't believe my fanfic idol misses chatting with me *grins* (Even though we don't get to talk much I still totally have a crush on you.) I miss our conversations, too. I'm sorry to hear you'll be moving again soon, sweetie. I remember how long you were M.I.A. from the Internet the last time you moved! Actually, I am moving, too, later this month. I have already made an appointment for the cable/Internet people to come out the very first day we move in, haha. Well, I hope everything goes smoothly and both of us don't have too much aggravation. But it never really works that way, does it??
Your new beta is good! The second chapter is very well-done. Aww, Toharu and Ario are right. Poor Goten *is* an idiot lol. But it's just so endearing. I can see why the Shaii is drawn to him ;-) I'll be looking forward to the next chapter, as always. Love ya and miss ya...
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Aww, you just made me so happy :) I can't believe my fanfic idol misses chatting with me *grins* (Even though we don't get to talk much I still totally have a crush on you.) I miss our conversations, too. I'm sorry to hear you'll be moving again soon, sweetie. I remember how long you were M.I.A. from the Internet the last time you moved! Actually, I am moving, too, later this month. I have already made an appointment for the cable/Internet people to come out the very first day we move in, haha. Well, I hope everything goes smoothly and both of us don't have too much aggravation. But it never really works that way, does it??
Your new beta is good! The second chapter is very well-done. Aww, Toharu and Ario are right. Poor Goten *is* an idiot lol. But it's just so endearing. I can see why the Shaii is drawn to him ;-) I'll be looking forward to the next chapter, as always. Love ya and miss ya...
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