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by chayron

person Nancy103
schedule October 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This made my day!! As usual, very good chapter although leaving us on a cliff hanger as he about to see his father was a little mean ;-) But I like it! I also really enjoyed Goten's dream. Not sure what to make of it just yet as I am trying to figure out if the tea cups mean anything or not. And I like the human Darren! Good character development even though he hasn't been in the story that long and we might not even see him again. Just well written. Thanks again for updating!!
schedule October 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I was soooo happy when I logged in and saw barracks at the top of the list again. I was jumping with joy. lol. great chapter. cant wait for the next one. keep up the magnificent work.
person Sophie
schedule October 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Woke up in the middle of the night wondering why the hell am I awake, do my routine phone check and BAM! Barracks update!
I just about jumped out of my bed with excitement :D
I really enjoyed this chapter! I'm going to miss Almanda, I hope she and Goten will meet again.
Darren is brilliant and funny for a human thrown in the saiyan world.
Thank you for the update :)
I love this story and your writing.
Now I'm going to be spending my time until the next update trying to decipher that dream..
I wonder if you use dream symbols in direct relation to what they mean in our world? Like in our dream dictionaries..

Much love! X
person Mango
schedule September 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I am anxiously awaiting the last few chapters so I can finally know what happens at the conference and what happens between Goten and Trunks. Please do update as soon as you can, I will check back on this story every few days or so until the end is posted.
person Rinku
schedule September 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Have you given up on this fic?
person Elisa
schedule September 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Omg This Is One Of The Best Stories I've Ever Read! You Are An absolutely amazing Writer. Please, Never Stop Writing. Thank You For Your Stories. They Really Are Wonderful :)
person Sophie
schedule August 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Hi there again!
Loved this chapter, sorry it's taken me so long to read and review!
As much as I love the smut and sex and stuff, what I really love about your story is that you're not afraid to focus on the storyline and action and leave that behind for a few chapters or more if it's what the story needs. I gives it body and suspense and I love it and can't wait for them to get to the whole part with Kakarot and Trunks and that threat and it's awesome and I kind of really want this on DVD..
person Anon
schedule August 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
You did a very good job at making this chapter scary! I really miss reading this AU and hope there will more ReynxGoten action forthcoming.... Soon! My whole summer has been spent checking every week to see if there's been an update. I hope you realize how much you have affected us with your great narrative skills!
schedule July 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
love the new chapter. i can't wait for the next one. so excited to see what happens when goten finally gets to see his dad again. i hope we gets to see more of the purple haired bastard soon too. lol. i can't wait to see that reunion.
person Achillona
schedule July 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
very, very scary. glad its over!

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