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July 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This was fun reading. I can't wait to read how Goten explains his power to the crew :) I can't wait for the next update :)
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July 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Argggg! This chapter was scary! Plus, my mom was watching Paranormal in the background, so every minute creepy music followed by tortured screams followed along with your narration.
I wonder what an iScouter would look like lol
You have no idea my exultation when i saw this was updated. Feels like it's been forever and a week since you last updated. Don't take so long to update!
I wonder what an iScouter would look like lol
You have no idea my exultation when i saw this was updated. Feels like it's been forever and a week since you last updated. Don't take so long to update!
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July 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
OMG you have no idea how excited I was to see that this fic was updated! Ugh those black ball thingys sound like a nightmare, reminds me of Tyki's "Tease" from D.gray-man :o. Looking forward to the rest of this story :3
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July 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter with edge of your seat suspense! I don't know if someone is infected or not but this chapter gave me the creepy crawlies! I liked how Goten thought of Trunks in a fond way of not only missing him but what he can experience with him, too.
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July 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I love this story so far it is awesome! I started reading it 3 days ago and I just finished reading it a couple of moments ago. I can't wait to read the next update/chapter
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July 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Waaaaaah when are you going to update?
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June 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
(Goten x Trunks and vice versa)
in your summary you make no mention of goten and your original character constantly fucking----where the hell is the gotenXtrunks_ this chap was boring as hell_ i've had to skip through many chaps just to get this far w/o falling asleep
in your summary you make no mention of goten and your original character constantly fucking----where the hell is the gotenXtrunks_ this chap was boring as hell_ i've had to skip through many chaps just to get this far w/o falling asleep
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June 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I agree with Rinku. The wait is driving me mad. I check everyday for a new update. lol. you are a fantastic writer. you draw the reader into the story with your detailed descriptions and great character building.
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June 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
After reading all 52 chapters I have to say I absolutely LOVE your fic! The wait for the next chapter is killing me!
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June 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. I can easily see this being 100 chapters +. I hope it is anyway. your writing is amazing. I can't wait for the next update. I check every day. soooo can't wait to see where this story goes. keep up the great work. praying you update fast.