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Hello, love your story. One of the best in my opinion.

However, I do just want to ask if it is actually a GotenxTrunks story or if it is now a GotenxOC? It has been many chapters since anything Trunks related has even been mentioned. Maybe update the story description so as to not mislead people (only a suggestion).

Oooooo I love where this is heading! Outer space beasties that act as parasites, working from the inside out....so much fun to read about. Now I'm definitely going to be on pins and needles for the next couple of chapters!

You know, your writing has improved by leaps and bounds since you first started, its so amazing. When I read some of your other stories, the grammar was so all over the place that this story makes me think that it was written by a whole other author completely! You have a much stronger grasp on English sayings and phrasings now than a few years ago. I'm really attached to the characters in this story, even though you killed the best one off :/ so I can't wait to hear more this summer!

I get far too excited every time I see you have updated!!
I'm so antsy to get my friends to read this but they refuse until its finished! ><

Brilliant job as usual :)

Another great chapter that moves along not only plot but also character relationships. Thank you thank you thank you for writing such a great fic!!! But now, why would they be called to "rescue" such a person? Is someone trying to get them all infected? Or is someone trying to delay them?? Looking forward to the next chapter!!

Great job. I can't wait to tsee what happens next.

I loved it!
Thank you for giving us such an amazing chapter again :)
Those last few lines are priceless :D

Squeee I loved it!!!
So excited for the rest :D

Lol, yeah I finished it two days later, wrote a review that was so angry, and decided to hold off on posting it but it went a little something like this: why the hell would you do that to Toharu you evil b--- and that's where I'm going to cut it. Really fell in love with your original characters, so great job on fleshing them out!


For the whole of December and January I came back EVERY DAY to check and see if this story would be updated....and I was always disappointed :( so imagine my ecstatic jubilee when I clicked my bookmarks and saw a link to chapter 50. I, literally, smiled so hard I had tears in my eyes.

I think this chapter really solidified Reyn as having a committed relationship with Goten and its going to be difficult when Goten chooses Trunks over Reyn.
Saying that, there is also a strong pull for Almanda and Goten to get together, since her affections for him are quite obvious. It seems like a likely occurrence, you know one evening when they both share a drink and reminisce over a few alcoholic beverages, I could definitely see a hookup happening....Kyon as well...loljk

Can't wait to read more!

This is amazing, YOU are amazing. You created a world and you pulled me into it in a way that i can't simply let it go. It's perfect, god, i can't describe it. I need more, i've become addicted to it. I've been reading your story for days nonstop, always wishing to get home earlier so i could read a bit more. I just hope you still intend to update it... such a masterpiece shouldn't go wasted.
Thank you very much for sharing your story. It inspired me and made my days brighter. I can't thank you enough and i really hope to read more of it. You are incredible.

Ok oh my god you are amazing and I love this story so much!!
Please tell me you are continuing it? I am eagerly awaiting more!!