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by chayron

person nighowl
schedule February 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I hope you finish with this story i love your stories im sure i have read every dbz you have made this one is my favorite so far i hate it when an author starts a story and dosent finish i hope you plan to continue this i love long stories idk if you add another 49chapters or more i would be happy to read every word please keep up the excell work
person Ava
schedule January 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I'm only on part 24 but it is magical. I am seriously hooked on your writing. I have to admit that I was daunted by the exquisite length of not only each chapter but the whole saga you have created, but I really am glad I took a chance.

The part where Trunks was all like, "Oh, I was just thinking that I wouldn’t mind spending the rest of my life trying to figure you out.” Had my milk been any further up my throat it would have been coming out my nose, I snorted so hard. I can't believe Trunks just proposed to Goten! How exciting!

I really love the way you write and I am sorry I haven't reviewed earlier because this really deserves all the best and I sincerely hope that you do not get a case of the writer's block, as so many long sagas end up to the readers' great frustration, because I would be devastated. DEV-Ah-STATED!
person asdf
schedule December 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I have never been one to write reviews, much less ones of praise. I am solely a lurker and have been one for nearly ten years now. I'm here now to tell you to keep writing Barracks because I am very interested to see what happens next. I have never before been driven from the shadow to tell a writer that. Ever. Consider yourself important.
person PeekaPika
schedule October 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
OMG thank you so much for continuing on with this story for so long! It is amazing! I have never read an AU as good as this one; your ideas are a wonderful twist on the tried-and-true universe, and the way the characters interact with each other is perfect. I love the depth of even your original characters. Also, thank you so much for confirming that Gohan's death was no accident! We have been waiting so long! It will be sad if Reyn gets killed in the battle, but honestly, even as much as I love him, Goten has to end up with Trunks... we all know it :) Anyway, i just wanted to leave you some random love, and encourage you to keep up the good work! <3<3<3
person peekapika
schedule October 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I just wanted to drop you a line and let you know I think "Barracks" is amazing - one of the best AU's I've ever read, please, keep up the good work!
person Nancy
schedule July 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Just finished readings it from the beginning...Wow! This has to be one of my all time favorite fanfiction stories!! It is SO well written and all the descriptions are wonderful to read without weighing down the story. Please update when you can. Thanks!!
person Silvers
schedule July 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I am really enjoying this story!!! It is never updated fast enough for me. (Of course even if it were updated every hour it wouldn't be fast enough) Thank you so much for the entertaining story and keep it up. :)
person Vega
schedule July 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
A great story! Thank you, dear Chayron! I am really looking forward to every new chapter and waiting for the reunion of Goten and Trunks.
person dreamer
schedule July 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I'll be interested to see what happens when they meet
person Mew2
schedule July 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Soooo glad you updated! I was anxiously awaiting this one. AND OMG I DON'T EVEN HAVE WORDS TO DESCRIBE HOW EXCITED I AM THAT THE PRINCE IS BACK SO I AM USING CAPITAL LETTERS INSTEAD OF COHERENT SENTENCESSS!!! I missed him sooo much. I hope we see him more. Also, it would be interesting to get his perspective like we used to. Love your story, please update again soon. :)

ps: Also, I believe you used the word "pray" once when you meant "prey". No criticism! Just letting you know.

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