rate_review Reviews

Very fun story! I never would have expected Vegeta as an incubus, or that he could change forms to suit different people's tastes. I imagine Goku will be quite happy with being a feast for Vegeta, though I would have liked to have a sequel. (lots of rope, eh?)
Great new idea for setting the stage between the characters, and fun ending--I really liked reading it!

Thank you, thank you, thank you!
This was awesome, can't wait for the next chapter of "Vegeta Doth Protest Too Much"!

Gah! Even your oneshots have to be short? You must be a sadist and we're the gullible masochists. But we like it. ^^ Oh well. I'll forgive you this time, only because it was an awesome read. At first, I thought Goku was a vampire or something...and when he didn't die, I thought for sure he was...or is he? Nah, you would've made that clear if that were so. I do wonder though what an incubus looks like. Not long ago I had to look up what an incubus was, but from the sound of it, they have tails. ^^ Anyways, I'll quit rambling and praise you. Just as I thought, I'm not disappointed with this read. I was practically bouncing with joy when I saw what this was about. ^^ Heh, I still am! I still can't wait for your update on Vegeta Doth Protest Too Much. Lots of rope, huh? Lots and lots...why so much? :/ I guess I'll have to find out. Good story! Can't wait for whatever other schemes you...scheme!

Very cute. :)

Appology accepted....
now, about Veggie as a incubus.. i must admit, i've never seen that one. though my taste in DBZ smut is not broad, you are one of very few i favor in this particular fandom. But damn, you write some of the best ...

and rope? rope sounds good... really, really good....

*fades with entertaining thoughts of tying anime characters up...*

this is one of the most unlikely (least likely, then?) DBZ stories I've read. this is not a bad thing, since I firmly believe that it does both reader and writer good to be ridiculous once in a while. I also found it utterly adorable for some reason *snerk* maybe it was the no-nonsense approach combined with what felt like naivete` in both characters. regardless, it was entirely cute. :) thank you!

the combined lemon was pretty good, not at all flowery, though it did have some abruptness and would have benefited from a little more foreplay but to hell with it, bring on the pr0n!

Okay - the sheep stopped me for a moment. :P I like the idea that his body automatically changes to suit his victim. And I'm very glad (of course) that Goku survived.

Loved it!

Vegeta really has no idea how much life force Goku has, lol, and will never have to feed on anyone else ever again :)