rate_review Reviews

this was a good one i think u did a good job of mixing the actions to the lyrics and i agree cause i read lots of song fanficys and didnt really like them all that much but i loved this one

I don't know the song but it fits well with the story.

Nice to see Goku not taking no for an answer, he knew Vegeta protested too much :)

Oh, no. You didn't make me feel bad. I was just saying that I agreed with you. I'm always negative about my stories, probably because I'm sorta new and I don't have a lot of confidence in the stories I write. ^^' Also, don't feel bad about expressing yourself, I do that all the time. ^^ I don't if you are or not, but after my review, I wasn't sure. We're all interested in how you get your ideas and it could give us a few tips on our story writing. Anyways, sorry for the misunderstanding.

Thank you! ^^

Dude, I totally know what you mean. I'm working on a song fic now and it's difficult. There's one song that goes along with it, but, I don't really like it going with my character. So, I chose a song that's basically making up my story for me. I thought about posting up a vote to see who likes which song better...but I decided not to. Anyways, is this your first story with a lemon? Well, there was that one story that you finished...so this would be your second one. It was yummy. ^^ I thought you did pretty good with this one, considering that it's a song fic and all. I'm wondering how mine with turn out...though, it might take me a year to get finished. -_- Also, I like the song. I like the movie that it was on, which is probably partly why I like it. ^^' You seem to be chock-full of ideas lately, you came up with a lot of stories in a short amount of time. Alright, I'll stop rambling now. I hope you get more ideas!