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March 5, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I was going to login just for this review but that didn't quite work out XP.
Anyway, this was excellent. I really enjoyed the transition from murderer/classic Vegeta to slightly less murderous/later Vegeta. You portrayed his power and arrogance and his slight softening heart excellently.
Amazing job I'd love to read more. =]
Anyway, this was excellent. I really enjoyed the transition from murderer/classic Vegeta to slightly less murderous/later Vegeta. You portrayed his power and arrogance and his slight softening heart excellently.
Amazing job I'd love to read more. =]
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June 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Loved it, great work!
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January 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hey, awesome writing! You and I write similarly and I really liked your pacing. The POV was nice too. Not too much, not too little.