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October 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Loved what you did with Ginyu, a fitting end :)
I worry that Vegeta is not strong enough for Frieza, especially if his henchmen join in. Poor Kakarot, he really wanted to kill Frieza himself, maybe Dende can heal him?
I worry that Vegeta is not strong enough for Frieza, especially if his henchmen join in. Poor Kakarot, he really wanted to kill Frieza himself, maybe Dende can heal him?
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October 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
That was touching when Kakarot said he was frightened of a relationship because of sex, I'm looking forward to the Vegeta pleasuring him bit :)
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October 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Short but I can see why as you want to save the fight for a new chapter.
Great reunion but why is Frieza there, I didn't expect that, is Kakarot strong enough :(
Great reunion but why is Frieza there, I didn't expect that, is Kakarot strong enough :(
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October 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
more please
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October 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Now that Vegeta knows all that Kakarot suffered no wonder he is fuming. I hope he doesn't give those responsible a quick death.
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October 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Four new chapters since I last reviewed, oh goody, I'll review them one by one :)
I was sure Brolli would kill Vegeta as he was so over-powering, so was thrilled that Kakarot helped him. Still, Brolli lived! Oh no! Hope you have a gruesome end planned for him.
Kakarot is so messed up and hurt, how can Vegeta make him see he means no harm.
I was sure Brolli would kill Vegeta as he was so over-powering, so was thrilled that Kakarot helped him. Still, Brolli lived! Oh no! Hope you have a gruesome end planned for him.
Kakarot is so messed up and hurt, how can Vegeta make him see he means no harm.
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September 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow you really know how to hook a reader. I hope brolly gets what is coming to him in a slow and painful manner. I hope vegeta gets there in time to help his mate.
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September 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
vegeta finally made it to namek. i hope he can save kakarott in time
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September 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
wow just deeply awesome well written goodness, this is truly amazing stuff, can't wait for vegeta to reunite with goku
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September 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OMG how on earth is Vegeta going to get him away from Brolli, he's much too strong! Hope the combination of him and the Nameks is enough.
Looks like Veggeta will have a real struggle with Kakarot if he does free him as Kakarot wants nothing to do with males anymore :(
Looks like Veggeta will have a real struggle with Kakarot if he does free him as Kakarot wants nothing to do with males anymore :(