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December 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
love the aggressive kakarott and the cuddly radditz
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November 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This story has progressed wonderfully since I last reviewed (sorry, had family tragedy).
Loving how feisty Raditz is and Nappa's determination to get him, glad he will still allow Raditz to fight.
I'm intriqued as to what will make Frieza release Kakarot, but also worried what he is going to go through, he's already gone through a lot of pain and his heart must be hardening. Hope Vegeta can thaw it once he realises he does really want Kakarot.
Also hope Bardock convinces the King that breeders are being auctioned off, and they try to find Kakarot.
Loving how feisty Raditz is and Nappa's determination to get him, glad he will still allow Raditz to fight.
I'm intriqued as to what will make Frieza release Kakarot, but also worried what he is going to go through, he's already gone through a lot of pain and his heart must be hardening. Hope Vegeta can thaw it once he realises he does really want Kakarot.
Also hope Bardock convinces the King that breeders are being auctioned off, and they try to find Kakarot.
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November 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
love it
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September 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
great chapter can't wait for the next one
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September 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
ooh this just keeps gettin better and better. i wonder whats in kakarott diary...bardock made it sound like not everythin in it would be good things
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August 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
great story, I am addicted to reading Enchanted Lies. It is amazing, its like a book!!!!! I cant wait for the next chapter. please finish and post so I may read.
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July 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Poor Kakarotto and Lavar. I want to see how Kakarotto revenge for this as I am so angry at the moment!
good storyline looking forward for update.
good storyline looking forward for update.
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June 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Good plot. Definitely different from what I have read before. Keep up the good work.
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June 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
"He was starting to like his new mother in law." Do you mean "He was starting to like his new step father." 1. Vegeta is not mated to Kakkarot so Bardock can't be his father-in-law yet. 2. it seems insulting to call men "mothers" even if they can breed. They are still men.
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May 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Please save kakarotto from evil frieza, please!