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November 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
You did very well capturing their ages here - I could easily tell that these were children playing around with things beyond their ken.
That said, you might consider adding some warnings to your summary - Minor1 being the main one, since these characters are both clearly under the age of 14 and both depicted that way.
That said, you might consider adding some warnings to your summary - Minor1 being the main one, since these characters are both clearly under the age of 14 and both depicted that way.