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I was really surprised with this FF. You know, my native language isn't English, so at first I didn't even know what diaper meant! XD So I just started to read... And after I understood what was happening, I was first like "Oooookay", but I kept reading nevertheless, and it turned out that I really liked and enjoyed your FF! Very descriptive indeed, but very nicely written. I liked it very, very much!

This was amazing! I loved every last bit of it, though I'm just a bit disappointed with the ending. It seemed to just... End. But that doesn't matter. The fabulous writing makes up for it. :D Thanks so much for sharing!

This was very well written, don't be afraid! I'll have to admit, I was kind of grossed out by the idea at first, but you made it so it was perfect. You could say it was right on the borderline... Your details were, well, good, to say the least. Also, I'm glad you wrote a diaper fic! Not many people have the courage to write AND post this kinda of story. But I'm also glad that you added a little smut in there, huhu. Roy is just so sweet here, taking care of Ed. But Ed is too... a little too... girly? So to speak? (No offense to girls in general, cause I am one). But as you had written, he was weak so I guess it's understandable. Overall, well done!

Wow... Just wow...
I was so skeptical of this but then it ended up being a really sweet story. It was excruciatingly awkward, but that's what made it so awesome!
I felt so sorry for BOTH Roy and Ed! Especially Ed! I just can't imagine that! I wanted to just hug the poor thing! XD
Anyways, I must commend you for writing this. It was very fun to read, and it was completely different from anything I have ever seen in the FMA fandom! Truly unique!

This wasn't bad at all! Well, not bad as in very well written; content-wise, yeah, kinda gross! :D I suppose reading this would be worse for someone who's never changed a baby before but as is, yeah, nothing too unexpected here. :) I can't imagine having to change an adult diaper tho. yeesh! Roy's a stronger person than I am for doing it! As bad as you described the mess Ed made, I thought for a minute that Roy was going to have to haul Ed to the bathroom and stand him under the shower to get it all off. :P That wouldn't have worked obviously (Ed was far too weak to support himself meaning Roy would have had to get in the shower with him - talk about really crossing the line!) so thank Heaven for wet naps! :D For me, Roy blowing Ed while he's in this weakened miserable state (and only just having been cleansed [completely one hopes] of quite a nasty mess) was squickier than the messy diaper was. It ran right up to the edge of being dub-con imho. Fortunately, Ed seemed to be consenting so it's all good. I do wonder what kind of relationship they'll have once Ed's convalescence is over. If a romance did blossom, they'd have a dirty diaper to thank for bringing them together. How bizarre is that! XD

I loved it! Write more pleae! ^_~

I loved it. You've did very well with Ed's feelings. I loved how everything came together. It'll be cute to see more if you were looking to write more other than that it stands perfectly on it's own. Great job!!!

It was different...but kinda touching =) I wouldn't mind seeing more of it. Oh and this story on ff.net has anonymous reviews disabled.