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for The Obsession

by MasterOfThebes

person taixi
schedule August 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
poor vegeta :( He puts his trust in one single person and she betrays him out of loneliness. It's sad that he killed his own daughter (assuming he didn't actually steal her away ... the body is missing after all) and those innocent employees. But still at least he now knows the real situation.
person Amy
schedule August 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Cant wait to see what happens next!
person Ulrike
schedule July 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow...so intense. Please don't leave me hanging here! This story gets crazier and crazier. Can't wait to read more!!
person MaJig
schedule May 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm not usually into Bulma/Goku stories, but I really did enjoy this one. I love the idea of how the darkness came to Goku. Wonderful idea. I would really like to see this as more than a one shot. I think it would work out really well. I hope you decide to write more, I'll definitely read it.
schedule February 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh man. I'm as stunned as Goku that Vegeta didn't know it was him... and I love the twist! Great work. I hope there's more coming!
schedule February 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
So much awesome.. Can't wait for more.
person sioVsio
schedule January 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
hey, this definitely deserves a sequel or an actual story, don't leave it as a one-shot, please ^^, and omg if Vegeta finds out (shudders)
person Pri
schedule December 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hey I liked it!!! ***Goku has a brain after all huhuhuhu***

Just maybe a little less thinking and a little bit more affair... it has great potential, please continue!!! Just don´t make MY Veggie suffer X_X´
person Ice
schedule December 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This was a wonderful read. I've always liked Goku & Bulma stories. I hope you continue this soon!

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