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XD I laughed heartily throughout this entire chapter. I especially liked Gohan's thoughts, ending with some variation of "as soon as Trunks lets me..." Oh...*wipes tear* Very nice. Oh Trunks, little devil you. I can't wait for the next chapter; I want to see how Goten reacts to all of this. Especially when Gohan gets home all deprived and whatnot, and is pretty much like, "On your knees, little brother." Tee hee, Gohan with his rape face on... ^o^

AHAHAHAHAHA! I knew the older male was Gohan and the guy who snuck in was Goten, but Trunks was kind of iffy. XD
But omg! :O I love mansex <3 XDDD Now you inspired me to write some more Gk/Gh. XD
Keep it up! :D

Hahahaha. Ok, I was pretty sure that's what was going to happen, but . . . I still totally gasped when it did. YAY!! I love this pairing! The accidental pairing, that is. Not as much as I love the pairing that was supposed to be, but every once in a while, one just has a craving for a little. . . Well, you know. It was a nice surprise because, while I knew from your profile that you were writing the intended pairing, I had no idea this little prelude would be include :D I love when you get two for the price of one like that.

So why did he let him do it? Was that part of his plan? Or did it just happen before he could stop it?

Gah! It's hard to write a review with no names in it. Can't even imagine a chapter.

Also, I've never read anything that ended with the word "fuckdammit," which was excellent :)

Oh yeah, and I suggest he makes it up to him with a threesome.


:D~

Nice. First chapter was amazing. Keep it up.

So excellent. *big perverted grin*

*giggle* I thought that's what was happening. I had tossed them out at first, thinking, "Well, they can just sense energy, so then...?" And my mind went off in several, mostly disturbing, directions after that. I'm glad it ended up being those three, really (gonna leave out names in case someone reads the reviews first, ohohoho!). I hope you continue it! I'm interested!