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Wow! What a great chapter^_^. Trowa just as good as told Duo and Quatre he loved them if not by those specific words definitely by action. This is quite a big step for our reticent acrobat. That he is willing to give up something that been a part of his persona for a good portion of his life is quite telling.

The lunch/voyeuristic torture was...YUM. Hope the heat was there for you this time because it was still there for me ~_^.
I can hardly wait to see Wufei's and Heero's reaction. I think it'll be pretty interesting. Oh, we finally get to see what Trowa's infiltration missions have been about. Seems like the next chapter will have plenty of action. Looking forward to it.

Okay, I have a request, or rather a favor. But first, I want to tell you how much I am enjoying reading this fic. I can honestly say that this is the first time I've enjoyed a threesome revolving around Duo, Quatre, and Trowa. I normally dont like reading such fics, because they are... Well to be blunt, rather boring. Dont get me wrong, there are some great authors out there, and some amazing lemons, but they are so predictable. You've taken a great concept, and have gone over and beyond this story line. Now in saying this, I have a confession to make. Im a total Wufei lover. I love him with anyone (or everyone ^.^) I like all of the characters, but Wufei has always been special to me. Now in saying this, I was reading some of your other responses and I happened upon the one that stated you wont be doing a side-fic on Heero and Wufei, because you want to keep them in character, and you cant do that with Wufei. May I write a fic on it? I will totally give you all the credit. (Ofcourse I have to, because I would of never been able to come up with the idea of Quatre "overhearing" them in an elevator, lol) I would totally understand if you dont want me to. But I admit I had a BIG inspiration when I read that part. Both the part before, during and after the elevator.... *Stares of into the distance, grinning like a loon* So, I wont take any offense if you say no, but I would like to have the chance to write one. *hand you a cookie as a peace offering*

Okay, this chapter was cute. I love the "revenge" Duo had planned, and I always love sexy play with food in it.

But the best part was just the realization that Quat had that the three of them were finally on equal footing and that Trowa and Duo were finally beginning to feel as strongly for each other as they do for him. That was nice. It just gave this chapter, and this story, a warm yummy feeling and made it more romantic.

And at the same time, it makes you fear for all three of them now, when they have gained so much, and could stand to lose it if anything happens to Trowa. Well done.

yay!!! i've been dying for more!! i can't wait to see what the other two will say... probably admit their own torid affair? that would be an awesome side story all on its own... i mean getting Heero and Wufei together is an achievement that should be shared right? what do you think?

I really like where you are going with the story and the pace you set. They are slowly discovering each other. It's lovely. But thank you for introducing Heero and Wufei necx chapter. They were missing from the story (Oh! We will hear about the supposed romance they are having, won't we? The one Q and Duo talked about?)

Ahhh, I love this story sooo much! ^.^ Is there really going to be a sequel, or were you kidding, because the last chapter thing has me depressed. I loved the angst and the sex. I never really thought that a 3x2x4 could work like this, but you did it wonderfully. I don't suppose you could fit in a little Quatre topping Duo? Pretty please? It's a pairing I never see, because most people like portraying Quatre as a sub, not a dom. I look forward to the next chapter!

Omg! This is the best 4th of July ever!!!! I came home to finding you updated!!!! Im so happy. ^.^
Ok, back to the serious stuff... Alright about as serious as you can get with amazing man-sex... *Stares off into the distance, drool hanging off chin. Jerks at loud noise* Uh? What? Oh yea right, story. Lol. I can tell you leading up to something. And I cant wait to see what it is. You giving that little hint of Trowa almost making his bust, is killing me. I know your going to do something. -.-
I just dont know what!!! Lol. I love the torture your putting Trowa through because of what he did to Duo, who in turn, did to Quat. Hehehe. They are taking full advantage of his Voyuristic kink. I love it. I love it when characters develop or reveal kinks. It so hot. What is really hot, is seeing Quat turn into a little sex-kitten. I cant wait to see what kinks he comes up with. OOOOhhhh. Thats going to be sooooo gooood. LOl. Dont keep me on my edge of my seat for long! I want to know what your leading up to!!!! (P.S. So you know how when you leave a review it has one of those little type-whats-written thingy there? So that it doesnt spam? Guess what this one was? "White mouthful". Is that amazing or what!?)

not one of you better lemons huh? i have to see you at your best then lol cause that was DAMN HOT!!!! please please please write more!!!

*Blink* *blink* Wow. That was... that was amazing. I mean flat out amazing. You took this to a much deeper level and I love it. Their nicknames! Omg. I love them. The way Trowa was telling them was great. I was about ready to jump into the story and slap him when he tried to walk out. I was screaming at my computer "You DUMBASS!!!! Dont you dare leave like this!!!" And then Duo got all up in his face and Trowa was right there back in his face. It was intense. And that lemon. *Fans self* That was hot. Trowa wanting Quatre after Duo was done.... That was like Einstein smart. I felt like myself blush after reading that. And that hasnt happened in a looooong time of reading fan fics. Trowa was so gentle yet so... rough. Despite his fears he is finding the dividing line very well with Duo and Quatre. Hes rough and hard with Duo and really gentle with Quat. Almost to gentle. But I have a feeling that hes getting a taste of what its like through Duo. And I think he likes it. He may not be able to up to what Duo can do but he is deffinantly finding how good it can be. I cant wait to see what happens!!!!

What a fantastic chapter!! The chapter title was very apt. It was all about their perception of each other and themselves in the relationship. You really brought out the emotions in each of them.

I very much enjoyed how you wrote Quatre in this chapter. He was more self-assured and confident. He didn't break down when the whole truth came out. He held Trowa and Duo accountable for their roles in the deception. He wasn't as fragile as either of them thought.
When Trowa tried to leave I wanted to reach into the story to pull him back but I knew Duo and Quatre wouldn't let him leave. His fear of hurting them and his feelings of not being worthy were finally revealed. It was funny how he was surprised that Duo understood even felt the same unworthiness because of the situation. Trowa wasn't as emotionally detatched as they thought.
It seemed one of Duo's fears was that he was only a filler between Trowa and Quatre. It was really nice that he received confirmation from them both that he meant more and was really part of the relationship.

By the way, the nicknames were adorable^_^. When Trowa explained the reasoning behind the names I just melted. So sweet!
And if that was your idea of not-so-hot lemon them I need my internal temperature checked. It was plenty HOT to me and mighty well-written.
I am sooo looking forward to thee next chapter.