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I really enjoyed this chapter. It did a good job of expanding on some of the inner emotions pushing at them,especially Trowa's. I was hearten to see Trowa's reaction to Quatre during his confession to Rashid. It was like he couldn't not comfort him when he felt Quatre's distress. That's quite telling for someone who is normally able to detach himself from the most stressful of situations.
My heart ached for him when he started getting anxious that Quatre was going to tell him it was over. That he was prepared to just up and leave if Duo and Quatre wanted to be together. It's awful that he feels he isn't worthy of their love;that he doesn't deserve love. He even thought he could remain detached from Duo. He hasn't realized that Duo and Quatre won't just let him disappear on them. Looking forward to the next chapter.

I really do love your story, it's rare to actually find a good story with keeping everyone in character while going through various phases. You've pulled it off extremely well and its virtually the only story that makes me come back to this part of the site. I really hope you update soon. x

I was floored when I read the line about Trowa deciding not to manipulate Duo or Quatre again, and that he'd move on completely if he had to. It's in character, but his manipulation played such a huge part in getting the other two to go that final step toward their arrangement. That's a real turning point for Trowa, and you really feel his panic when he realizes that they other two could possibly have found some happiness without him. Wow. Heartwrenching stuff, that, and Quat coming out. Trowa's introspection that Rashid might be right and that he might not be good enough for Quat was right on point; again, you can see Trowa feeling that way, for that purpose, it's so much in character the way you have him written so far.

I love this. I've been CRAVING an update to this and you delivered. I can't wait til they chip away at Trowa a little more, crack through his layers, hopefully before he takes off. His "void" that Quat felt worries me.

When Quatre makes up his mind,watch out. I loved seeing Quatre return to his confident,playful side. Even when he wavered he was determined not to let his doubts weigh him down.

My goodness, the clothes borrowing scene and subsequent kitchen scene was soooo sexy. As I read, I could picture those scenes in my mind's eye. It was almost like I was right there and could reach out touch them. *Comes back from that image wiping away drool^_^* Well written chapter!

Dang,I'm just sad for Trowa. He's slip in and out personalities for so long that he has lost touch with his own. I'm glad Quatre's so determined because he'll need every ounce to reach our reticent acrobat.
Duo has to be dealing with a lot. Between realizing how far Trowa has retreated to his merc persona and that he'll soon be going on assingment,Duo has to be a little worried about their very new relationship.

Would absolutely love to see this story continued in a sequel. It would be extremely interesting to see the effects Trowa's type of job could have on them emotionally and physically. Great idea.

Breakfast and borrowed clothes are two of my favorite afterglow activities, in fic or in real life. I adored Trowa's confession, it totally fit, and it was great to see Quat actually be really happy about the turn of events with both men, especially Duo, who deserved it. He didn't do that whole "maybe we made a mistake" thing the morning after, which made me grin.

I really enjoyed this. I'd LOVE a sequel. I also like the idea of the three of them building Trowa's home. Kinda parallels them building their relationship and sharing something with Trowa that he's done alone until now. Funny that he doesn't like potatoes.

Evil? Mwah?Bwahahahahah!!! *looks smug* So happy to be of survice! I still think you could make it into a Novella but I suppose I can settle for Arc, I guess. Lol I definantly understand what you mean about getting your best ideas when you cant write them down. Except for me they always happen at work, its really bad cuz im pretty sure my boss wouldnt aprove of me suddenly jotting down excellent lemon ideas right in the middle of my shift. Escpeically if it is where our customers might see them.... Yea. Really not good. Lol. Im soooo glad you updated. And with lemons to boot! I was jumping for joy when i read that you have a sequel. Which means more lemons, right? Im intrigued by your hint about the inner workings of Trowas mind. Will he be able to overcome some of the insecurities he has? I mean, i know he doesnt come right out and say it but it almost seems as if he hes afraid to show Quatre and Duo what he is really like. He said that he needed Duo to help him communicate with Quat, but there is still some stuff that he doesnt even want Duo to know right? Some things that they can understand but Trowa doesnt want to chance it because hes afraid it will push them away? I cant wait to see what happens!!!! I have weak spot for when Trowa calls Quatre "Little One". It is really endearing! Does he have a nickname for Duo too? So do we get a bit more insight to Office 2324? Because I really think Quat and Duo gossiping like old bitties are hilarious. Whats even more endearing is Trowa just sitting back and listening to it with a little smirk on his face. He loves them. I can totally see it. Even if Quat doesnt. Poor Quat. But Im sure you will help him with that right? I kinda has a lemon request too. *starts blushing* Do you think that maybe at some point and time you might be able to put in a.... doubleteamingofduowithtrowaandquatretakinghimatthesametime? *blush turns worse* I suppose that wasnt very clear.... *Takes a deep breath while hiding behind hair* Can Trowa and Quatre DP Duo? I know thats reaaaallly graphic but that would be so hot. I mean really hot. Like, center of the earth hot. If that was a bit to... crude to ask for then totally tell me. Sorry. *holds out cookie* I just have this mental image of them together.... *starts blushing again* Yea... Maybe I should stop that line of thinking before it gets me into more trouble.

Damn! What a way to wake up. That was lemony goodness. I definitely picked up sexy/shy from Quatre. You did a good job expressing that through the chapter.
Trowa still has a ways to go before he can feel more at ease,emotionally at least,around Duo and Quatre especially. It was nice to see them both try to relax Quatre and show him,physically and emotionally,how he can be with them. It's great that he is finally realizing how his second guessing and lack of confidence has effected his life. You were so right that,as an empath, the sense of rejection would effect him more. Nice to see him get some of his determination back.
Once again, Duo kept them in the moment. He's determined to keep them from retreating into themselves. Looking forward to your next chapter.

LOVED IT...SO WELL DONE! NICE JOB INCLUDEING TROWA....MORE PLEASE...

I think this was definitely a strong chapter for Quat. I like his moment of self-reflection, and how he didn't just lie there pitying himself that he wasn't the focus of the other men's full attention when Duo rode Trowa. I like that he's getting some of his assertiveness back.

My favorite moment of it was when Trowa woke up and felt both men's breath flowing over his skin. That was very sexy and it brought everything into sharp focus, you could really sense three people in the bed, it became tangible.

Ok, so now im curious. I had originally thought that this would be a short story almost a PWP but now you've opened up some really good plot lines... You will continue with those plot lines, right? Cuz let me tell you, Im obsessed with your lemons. They are flat out amazing. But im soooo curious about how this is all gonna pan out. You have enough to were you could prolly end the story now with one more chap but you also have enough to do an excellent novella. Im dieng to know what happens. I can totally see this working out but its the bumps along the way that make it so interesting. I will be the first to admit that im extremly nosy. EXTREMELY. And atm im completly obsessed with Trowa in this story. Ive got to know what happens!!!! So im begging you. If you arent going to keep the story going much longer, then PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE give an epilouge? Pretty pretty Please? With a Cherry ontop of Quatre? Oh wait, Duo already took care of that didnt he? *grins evily*