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This a absolutely amazing story, thank you

Chapter 7 can only be described as brilliant

Goodness gracious. Ten pages of lemony perfection. I didn't come away from this wanting anything else, because it already had so many good elements in it. I love how affectionate and sexy it was with lots of psychological, emotional interaction instead of just being all about heavy breathing. Quatre listening to his space heart really sharpened this, because you wondered how he was going to get around the fact that he wasn't physically attracted - or so he thought - to his best friend, but there's no bigger aphrodisiac than seeing yourself through someone else's very loving eyes.

On the one hand, I wanted to feel sorry for Trowa, yet at the same time, Duo was only doing what he told him to back in the beginning, namely keeping him from hurting Quatre, in a sense. I didn't think I could ever love a chapter more than I did the last one, since the tension in it was perfect and had me bouncing in my seat, but this resolved it perfectly.

So I won't nag you to give us more or anything... *taps foot, checks watch*

Oh. My. Goodness. This story is so excellent that I read it in one go^_^. I absolutely love how you wrote Trowa in this story. I'm glad you didn't take the sarcastic but otherwise emotionally blank route I've read in other stories. Talk about still waters running deep. Beneath his calm surface is a plethora of emotions waiting to be discovered. He holds so much inside,at his own detriment, so he won't hurt hurt those he holds dear. When he broke down after his talk with Quatre my heart ached for him.

Quatre's character is quite different than I've seen him portrayed. He became so fixated on Trowa that he was blind to how that obsession changed him and how he related to other people,especially Duo.
Speaking of Duo,I felt so awful for him in this story. It seemed like he was going to be the odd man in the triangle until I read this last chapter. Instead of odd man,he seems to be the catalyst to bring Trowa and Quatre closer. He bridges the gap in their communication emotionally and physically. And what a gap bridger Duo was in that last chapter~_^. That scene sizzled. It was so sexy with such an emotional undercurrent. Quatre finally feeling Duo's emotions and determine to feel more. Also,I like how when Trowa tried to retreat Duo made sure he felt included. He's determined to make it a true relationship on all sides. Thank you for taking the time and effort to share your wonderful story. Looking forward to the next update.

I can definitely see how Duo is gonna benefit this relationship. Quatre is so blind sometimes. And I like that you have a Duo/Trowa relationship going on here because you practically NEVER see this couple. It's really good so far. Yay! Quatre is gonna kiss him. Finally! It's so sad how Duo has been suffering from this three way. Hopefully it all works out soon

okay...suspense much??? Meanie.

It was fabulous. Can't wait for chapter seven.

Meesa likies!! Not very often that I come across a 2x3x4 relationship. To see Q as an obsessive personality with weak tendencies is a little strange, as is seeing Tro as a borderline recluse. I do like how you are going through the subtle dynamics of changing in their dealings with one another. To see them grow as a person and see the relationships take hold is really exciting. I do feel so bad for Duo. Feeling as he does right now. I hope things work out for him. He is undoubtedly my favorite character. Keep up with the great work!!

Cant wait for the next part of the story! The talk!

I'm just rubbing my hands together in happy anticipation after reading chapter five. I can't wait for that discussion. I can relate to Trowa at this point, champing at the bit to be with Quat, even though he made a great big fuss about pretending to push him away. Love the visual of him sexy in sawdust.

I love how Duo doesn't pull the punches when he confronts him, it's definitely a big part of his charm in this story. I almost don't know who I'm worried about more in terms how badly he might get hurt, Duo or Quatre. Poor braided guy might end up getting used by Q and Trowa both, in a sense, if the other two who are in love with each other don't let him all the way in.

But this was fabulous.

Looking forward to the next update. Poor Duo; Quatre just kept digging the hole deeper! This is one of my favs! More soon please!