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Poor Duo! Quatre really is going off the deep end there and hurting the people around him. Cant wait for the next chapter!

This wasn't a downer. I loved it. But it makes me want to beat Trowa about the head with a big stick.

Poor Quat! I'll be saying that a lot. I love how Trowa maneuvered him into trying to "console" Duo and plead with him to enter into the arrangement the other two men wanted, like it was his own idea. That's well played!!! And the thing is, Quatre's so compassionate and wants so much to please other people, too, so you can tell he's going to grudgingly go along with a relationship with Duo even at the expense of ruining thier friendship because he wants Trowa so much. But at the same time, you can tell Duo's not just going to settle with being the sympathetic ear when Trowa's an asshole, he'll want to prove himself to Quatre as being able to love him the way he deserves.

I love how you come up with this stuff. It's exhilarating. The last chapter when Trowa ran off broke my heart, but this one has me on the edge of my seat. Great work, you.

Wow! an update. I love the way you are working the characters. Its sad to see Quatre reach the stage he has, torn and weak in front of Trowa. Trowa really had no choice to do what he did even though it hurt him and Quatre. Hopefully things will work out for good. There looks like a long spate of angst coming up. Wonder how Quatre will work his way over all this. I foresee him going over the deep end to accuse Duo of his supposed failed relationship... more please soon!

I normally hate 'bastardizing' one of the g-boys, but it seems to me, this was done with a purpose. Trowa wants Quatre to return to the strong, confident guy he once was, right? So, it was more of him adopting an attitude to push Quatre to the edge. As long as it all works out in the end, I'm happy. ^_^ Look forward to reading more and seeing where this is going.

whoo...wow. WOW.

I was that close to crying when Trowa called Quatre weak. That moment when Trowa gave himself over to his own pain at hurting him was almost tangible. Doggone it, Trowa! But I love this. I love how you set it up that Quatre will go from being obsessed to more resolute, maybe even a little more aggressive in showing Trowa what he wants. From his internal narrative, what's funny is, he might already love Duo a little, even if he hasn't processed those feelings that way. Poor guy was so hurt just at the mere thought of Duo possibly abandoning him, even if it was only for an afternoon. You just see this train wreck building but there is so much to look forward among these three, maybe even a "what do you have that I don't" dynamic between Quatre and Duo.

But man, Quatre only needs one little twang right now to make him snap!

Definitely loved the plot deviation for the lemon! It was awesome! I want some more please!

I definitely didn't mind the deviation. ^_^ That was some hot 3x2 action. A very interesting plot line and I'm thoroughly enjoying, as I enjoy all of your fics. ^_^

As soon as Trowa backed Duo up against him, you hooked me. We're talking happy shivers and me running to the kitchen for some chocolate chip cookies. This was worth the wait. It didnt feel like a deviation in plot, it just felt like lemony goodness.

Mmm, I love 3x2 moments, though they're so hard to find. There's just something about Trowa dominating Duo that's very erotic. There are also a few stories out there where Trowa compares Duo to Quatre when they're having sex, which I'm glad you didn't do. I also like how you focus on all three character's feelings, instead of putting emphasis on only Quatre and Trowa. I was really excited when I saw that this story had been updated. Alternative pairings (meaning not just 1x2 and 3x4) are fun to read, but are so rare.

Oh that lemony goodness was soo.. well.. good! I can't wait to read more!

-till then!