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June 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Great start! aww.. goku has a secret fantasy! I guess our pure hearted hero isn't that innocent, is he? ;)
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June 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This is one of the HOT g/cc fic I've ever read and i LOVE it!! it was kinda sweet and beautifully written.. and i can see that happen in dbz world too. Keep up the good work :)
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March 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
ahhhhhh very very steaming hot, i love this fan fic
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February 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I lost it when Vegeta walked in on them--and didn't seem to care that he did! hahaha excellent chapter. Can't wait for more.
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February 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
More now please? This is really hot. I look forward to reading the next part.
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December 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is so good! I had a blush while reading it since the description of everything going on between the two was so erotic and believable. I enjoyed the background that you added so that this was not just some sex story.
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October 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Whoo! That was scorching hot! I love the way you wrote Goku and Chi-Chi's characters, it's so much like them. Can't wait for your update. I think I need a glass of water . . . ^_~
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September 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This story is so hot *fans self*
Keep up the good work ;3
Keep up the good work ;3
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August 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
PLz PLz update soon... Super Hot Hot
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April 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh my God, I love this. I'm delighting in the fact that Goku and Chi Chi are being written about moreso lately. It was well-written and I could emotionally follow the path of Goku's torture. I like how you didn't make either too smutty (not them) and had just the right amount of innocence that would fit the Sons. I'll be waiting on the next chapter =)