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Please don't skip gokus birthing in all the yaoi fanfics I read the male birthing is the best part especially after the birth when the baby is breastfeeding

I gotta say, this is by far my favorite story that I've read on this site. Very kinky and I'd like to see you get even kinkier. If you do go into the birthing, maybe do the whole "sex at the end of the pregnancy will break the water" scenario... Maybe do the reunion at a later time. That's just my suggestion. I hope you continue this story. I've read it about 4 times now and I still enjoy it. Thanks!

awesome story!

ahh awesome stuff, i really love this, it's realyy well written & you are doing a brillinat job on it :D

When are you going to update this story? It's really good! And I want to see what happens next with everyone!

Sorry for late review, I have been at the hospital until my Dad lost his long battle with cancer :(

Turles as a bed-time story! Wonder if the slave one gave Vegeta ideas?

Loved the vision of Vegeta holding his tail high and showing off his plug to passer-bys :)

Wow, awesome sixsome, how do you top that? Eager to read more :)

O.o My, Vegeta is just full of self-confidence, isn't he? Showing himself like that in public...he's brave. Hehe. But wow, that party was hot. O.o Hehe, so like Vegeta to want to take on 'everyone'...never wanting to give up a challenge...or sees a challenge that he can't possibly pass up. Goku's pregnancy sounds awful. O.o I actually hope it doesn't last long. Ooooo that'd b cool if Vegeta did see his dad. ^^ Or...it could be awkward. :/ Again I like the length of the chappie, looking forward to what comes next, as always. ^^

Can't wait for the next chapter!

Lol I love it!!! you can still get us our suppers just have the elites try and take Vegeta away and bam! instant supper goku specialy if he was pregnent!!! love ya bye

*mutters more to herself* I was wondering if you were going to update this month. >.> Huh. How did King Vegeta find out what they called their slave? >_> Oh right...i guess getting a bunch of buddies over to have them bang your slave can spread word. ^^' That's interesting, how he was taken (though a bit of it is kinda confusing :/)...can they do that? I mean...they're royalty. :/ Hehe, it almost seems like King Vegeta is proud that his son is a good lay...instead of disappointment. And yes, Vegeta is that good. XD I almost feel sorry for Bardock and Raditz...actually, I really do feel sorry for them. After all, they've been tortured all week. :) And this was a really good chapter. It was actually longer than usual. O.o Next one sounds even more interesting, and hopefully just as long. :)