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O.o that was unexpected. So...Vegeta will be the daddy then? (Since Goku was in heat and all...)? O.o That was unpredictable...and the next chapter sounds like hell will break loose. >:D

Vegeta didn't seem that bothered that he was royalty, but then again they did throw him away so he probably hates them.

Loved the orgy :) Had to laugh when Vegeta wore them all out! He must be sooo wet and sticky now. Did Goku have a turn on him too?

*gasp* I can't believe I didn't review last time! I'm so sorry! >.< That was different. O.o I'm surprised Goku shared his slave. :) It was still good...no, good's an understatement. It was tasty. :) And...we now know who Vegeta is. :3 The next chapter sounds promising. ^^ I have a face at the end of every sentence. O.o

YAY for a proper gang-bang. And cum-coated Vegeta. *slurp*

I Love it chapter 5 was great and I know chapter 6 will be even better so update soon.

Also, I should have mentioned earlier (was being ADD) that I appreciate little details like the safety orange, in the midst of all that pure smut. I'm not really sure why I care, but there it is. Also, I hate orange, so it's a good thing Goku is naked a lot. He's best that way.

This is hawt. I'm not really all that into the slave/BDSM/kink thing in general, but I'm highly fond of debauched Vegeta, so it all evens out. Also not that fond of Radditz, but he seems to be alright in this fic, and he contributes to the Vegeta-debauching, so it's all good. The foursome...nice picture, indeed!

You do have me curious on Vegeta's over-sensitive ass, though. Is it supposed to be something we can figure out, or did you just throw out the question to let us know it's an important detail? In any case...thanks for writing! I will be keeping up with this one. :)

Really loved that phrase 'morning mountings' made me grin :) Then that awesome foursome was so hot! Vegeta definitely had the best position in that :)

Finally Bardock exhausted Vegeta, but 12 plugs! Ouch!

Oooh, does Bardock suspect that the king's child didn't die after all?

So if it's not Vegeta then maybe Goku will be the one to get preggers.

Yum, nice morning routine and position for Vegeta to assume , and he gets to have all three each morning :) You threw in a bit of heeling too, marvelous!

Knew Vegeta would win at chess, he always struck me as good at strategy. Glad Bardock rewarded him.

Mpreg? Well Vegeta is the one on the receiving end, so I guess it will be him.

damn.... so fucking hot! please update soon.