rate_review Reviews

*sings* Delicious! ^^ That little bit of history was actually interesting. o.O and i'm not a huge fan of that subject. Oooo, it'll be weird to see you write a male pregnancy. I don't know why...probably because it doesn't really seem like your thing. :/ Still, it'll be interesting all the same. ^^ Can't wait for more. :)

Cute!! I really enjoy your writing style, and I'm really interested to see just where this story goes.

Glad Goku was angry about how Vegeta was treated, that's true to his character. Also liked how Vegeta back-chatted Raditz, also in character.

Wow, pleasure overload for Vegeta, and it was his first time! I can only imagine how he felt, and now he gets to do it every day :) *Feels jealous*

Requests? Hmmm, I read a story somewhere where the slave was called on to 'assume the position' every time a master walked in, would like to read that. Also, always love Vegeta trained to heel and lapping :)

I know. I'm just saying that I've never read a story with Vegeta in character when he's a slave. It's new to me. I don't know if you were agreeing with me or not. *shrugs* Oh well. Anyway, that was a good chapter. *sighs* it's just a shame that it's...a little short. :/ However, the next chapter sounds even more promising. ^^ The plot to this is different. I like how you've made Vegeta. I actually feel sorry for him (no suprise there). It sounds like he's just been tortured all his life. But...Kakarot, Raditz, and Bardock are going to change that. ^^

*stifles dripping nose*
hot damn, i love an eager Uke. and vegeta roaring out his pleasure... *swoons*
Have i mentioned lately how much i love your stuff?? It's awesome!!! and you asked for requests, suggestions?? *glomps*
Hmm... Veggie chained up. It doesn't have to be soon, I can wait... but i definitely want to see him tied/ chained up and used. Nothing like it, eh?

Oh, and on a side note... I updated one of my own stories. *does happy dance and shamelessly pimps out own work*

I liked this chapter. I thoroughly enjoyed the breaking your pet in. Can't wait for the next chapter

Wow (wipes drool from mouth) Super HOT!!! I can't wait for the next chapter. Awsome job!
Maybe could there be some OTK spanking (Goku spanking Vegeta) you don't have to I just thought I would ask.
Again, an amazing chapter can't wait to see whats next :D

Oh, a new story from you, yummy :)

That seemed like instant attraction between Vegeta and Goku, despite Vegeta never knowing pleasure, no doubt he will find out soon :)

Can't wait for the deflowering!

I like this so far. Looking forward to the next update. : D

I can't wait for the next chapter! I want to see where this is going, its really good so far.