rate_review Reviews

Hi,
I want to say that you really stir me up with emotions as you told us about your own experience. I'm really sorry to hear that.
Really don't know what to say... But I do hope that your life is going to be much better than before.
And for the story, I'm really hooked up with this story! Been awhile since I read a good opening chapter for a fic! I really mean that.
I haven't been visiting this site for sometime, hence just read this story just now, really. And just want to say you really good at building up a story.
Making me and other readers curious about what going to be happen next(I know they do feel the same way).
Anyway, just want to say, hope you continue this story.
Thank you.

Interesting story so far.

I'm curious to see what happens.

Well, the beginning, or rather, the italicized part was really really crappy. Meaning, I think you started it out bad. To be honest, it was enough to almost make me turn away, but then, as I read on, it got better and better until the end where it left me interested enough to keep reading. The part where you implied Dr. J abused Heero is interesting too by the way, but make sure you play it up and make it more obvious in future chapters.

Other than that, keep up the good work.

P.S. I think you should make Duo seme.