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Are u ever going to upload the sequal? Cause the ending is kinda bothering me, cause i hate storie's with such a sad ending, and i just want to read the rest.....

Ah. I didn't think the last chapter seemed ending-y enough. Guess I was right. XD

So. Great chapter. Depressing as all get out, lol, but still good. Makes me look forward to reading the next story, which I assume was the intention. So, congratulations!

Incidentally, that would be a pretty normal weight, assuming Gohan was approaching six feet, which he probably would have been.

Oh, the drama. Oh, the angst. But it's all good. It makes everything else seem much happier.

I admit to being mildly confused, though. Was that the ending of the story? 'Cause the last couple of paragraphs felt kinda ending-y to me. Am I wrong? I mean, a continuation would be good, but an appropriate ending is always fantastic too.

And speaking of the last few paragraphs, I don't quite know why, but I really liked them. They just sort of...I don't know. They were very well written, I suppose.

Interesting...I have a feeling things are about to get angstier. If that is a real word. Which it's not.

I'm beginning to believe I may have been mistaken about where this was headed. Hm. The Goku stuff is interesting, though. On account of, you know, incestuous drama and all that.

So here I wait to find out what's really going on here...

Please tell me you will be making more of this! email me if you do at yaoibatman@hotmail.com

Aw...self-sacrificing Trunks was adorable.

Anyway, I'm liking this, even if it is all just lead up to the Big Picture. And oh, shit, the incestuous drama! Dead Goku had the hots for Gohan, who watches his father's homemade porn and gets off on it...hilarious.

Excited to see what happens next!

Ah! You and your multitudes of stories! You are very prolific lately.

Let's see... it's hard to tell from a prologue, but I think this could be going places. I did feel it was a tad rushed, but I get that it's a prologue and that this is just the setup, rather than the actual meat of the story, so it's okay.

So, I'll definitely be watching for this as well. Keep at it!

An interesting (and depressing) start. If this is leading up to what I think it is that will make me very happy. All this angst will make for some damn hot brotherly love lol.