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for Broken In Pieces [Discontinued]

by hidaritoki

person Dragon7
schedule April 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Very good start!! Looking forward to this story it sounds great update soon.
person Neith
schedule April 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I like your story and I hope your life calms down and things get better.
schedule April 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ah! That's not right! I was soooo not expecting that! :( I shall kill whoever destroyed the Namekians! (And whoever took the dragonballs >_>). *Sighs* I guess our poor Kakarot must wait for his mate. v.v The King will be next on my hit list if he brings back Metga. -_- Short chappy, but I understand. ^^ Can't wait for a longer chapter! O.o
schedule April 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
more more more more more more more more more more more more more xD I like this beginning you have to continue it!! I will be showing time to time to see if you update this sequel xD I love it and you know it don't torture me by making me wait T_T update soon
person Bluesake
schedule February 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait for the update! I wonder if he will bring back vegeta's bearer as well. >< Looking forward to seeing what happens.
schedule February 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yay! The sequel! ^^ Oooo, you kept the bible verses. ^^ *looks at one of the dream sequences* does this mean Veggie might be the sub? O.o I hope he comes back. ^^ What am i saying? He better come back. If not for me, then Kakarot's sake. :( Can't wait to see what happens next. ^^
person Zofo
schedule February 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yippee, the sequel :)

Was the second dream a premonition or just Kakarot's subconcious desire to father kids with Vegeta? I guess time will tell.

Poor Kakarot is besides himself with grief. I just want to hug him and tell him he will have his Vegeta back soon. He will won't he? He better eat soon though. I don't want him withering away, and neither would Vegeta :(

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