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March 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Powerpole extend!
Hahaha, you and your crazy pairings. I have to admit Upa has always grossed me out considering his breath was garlicky enough to appear greenish-brown in the anime and force a vampire into submission. However, Goku was great--lol--"just stick it in your mouth, Upa, it doesn't taste bad." That's goku-logic right there ;-)
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Hahaha, you and your crazy pairings. I have to admit Upa has always grossed me out considering his breath was garlicky enough to appear greenish-brown in the anime and force a vampire into submission. However, Goku was great--lol--"just stick it in your mouth, Upa, it doesn't taste bad." That's goku-logic right there ;-)
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March 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Holy crap! I've never thought of this pairing! I liked the way you handled it, especially since it was two boys going at it--one for the first time. Quite nice. Also, I enjoyed your use of the word "untoward". Haven't heard/seen it used before. And the end there...lol, it's like an evil cliffhanger. *shakes fist* WHY!?!? Anyway, very cute. Nicely done.
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March 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I liked it! I was snickering at Goku's (predictable but oh so entertaining) obsession with food and Upa's earnestness to repay Goku was cute. But the end... whoa, I so wish it didn't end there.